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Bluebell Wood

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Beneath a lush umbrella of green
we lay on a bed of violet petals.
The sun danced across our skin,
dappled and golden.
A light breeze,
gentle and caressing,
ruffled the leaves above.
The air was sweet and heady
and i fell in love.


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Andy N

Tue 30th Mar 2010 08:11

bit of a change in tone for you there, kathryn... was nice to see something totally different (from what i have read off yours).. perhaps the last line is a bit tellie but it's the way i would have gone with it..

keep em flowing! would like to see more following on from this..

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