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Row of Flowers

I run through the garden,
a labyrinth
of my life,
and still
I have not found
my center yet.
But I continue to run blind,
feeling the ray of sunlight
on my skin
or feeling the cold rain
soak down into me,
and I still run.
My fingers touch
the soft petals
of the red roses
that hug these green walls
of my prison
for love will never free
the person still locked inside.
I don't know who I am,
so how are you to know me?
And I still don't know
where I am going,
but I'll always desire for the day
to run through this world
instead of a garden
that I sleep in
with each passing moment.

Row of Flowers
by, Melissa R. Mendelson

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Comments

<Deleted User> (4281)

Wed 20th Feb 2008 23:39

Hi, Darren
Well, perhaps we look at life from different angles. Not all will be able to get that perfection. There will be some obstacles and hardships that one encounters. The poem has a lot of life WISDOM’

I run through the garden,
a labyrinth
of my life,
and still
I have not found
my center yet.

Every day to discover and continue what life offers. Agree with your opinion, the above stanza makes perfect sense - we run in life like in a Labyrinth - that was what I had in mind - All makes perfect sense!… Thank you...Zuzanna

darren thomas

Tue 19th Feb 2008 15:18

Thanks for your encouraging words about my poem 'hurt'. I do tend to try and write from within and it seems that your poetry too is inspired by emotional events that still sound pretty raw.

Poetry is a conduit into many worlds and when your emotion travels with you it makes the writing and the reading process that much more enjoyable. Great stuff to read. I can't say that i agree with Zuzanna on it all making sense. I get a feeling of confusion or a hesitation about something. Mixed emotion tied to a decision in life. Listen me - i sound like Russell Grant the Astrologer!

<Deleted User> (4281)

Mon 18th Feb 2008 07:05

Hello Melissa~ Excellent write. Creative - filled with a lot of metamorphosis. Makes the poem stands out. The expression like running in your garden of life and did not find the center yet. Like a labyrinth you are feeling sort of lost there. But it all makes perfect sense when the reader follows your thoughts. GREAT JOB!!
Thank you…Zuzanna

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clarissa mckone

Mon 18th Feb 2008 03:30

HI Melissa, this is such a nice poem. Do any of us really know ourselves,or where we are going? I really enjoyed this poem and felt a connection to it. thanks Clarissa

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