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I gave. You never.

I gave you my love

But it wasn't enough

For you sold me out 

I tried, but you cried

What the hell was that about?!

It was always the same

You'd call my name

I'd drop everything 

And chase after you

But I was a fool

To think that you

Really and truly

Loved me

I found out through another

That you were a liar

A cheater

A schemer

A victim of your own demise

So even though it hurt

To face the truth

I refused to be used

By the likes of you!

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keith jeffries

Sun 3rd Nov 2019 17:42

Lynn,

I read this poem as if I were on an express train. As I climbed off onto the platform, I thought, Yes girl you have it right.
More poetry from heart and mind please.
Thank you
Keith

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Lynn 7.

Sun 3rd Nov 2019 17:05

Awe, thanks! <3

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Martin Elder

Sun 3rd Nov 2019 15:08

I love the way this bounces a long at such a good pace and rhythm
nice one

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