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The ladda tale

Jack and Phil went up the hill

To talk to Beck and Jill

Jack was excited he went too fast

Phil was happy to go last

Jack saw the castle door locked where Beck was 

He took a ladda to climb through the wall

Jack was new to approaching the woody ladda

He fell went tumbling down where Phil was eating pasta

Jack broke his leg and went unhappy to hopital bed

When Jack wanted to use the loo a beautiful nurse came to his rescue

Jack forgot all about his broken leg and was lost in nurse's eyes

Phil came to meet Jack but the door was locked

He wondered what to do, so he peeped through 

The half shut window, got Jack's secret floating on

Phil was shocked to see Jack sleeping in the nurse's arm

 

 

Dedicated to Jack the friend who fell from ladda

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◄ Night

The destined hour!! ►

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Do.RoThy

Sun 1st Dec 2019 13:13

O Thale, i missed ol this fun
Waz away da whole day bizi as ant ? Helen
Btw, these vengaboys have made me mount the ladda
But what am i suppose to do here now??

Donny Dear i didn't fall
No broken legs or hand
I hv no Caroline waiting
Nor do i want any Chris

Po dear, what about vinegar n paper
What tradition? Elaborating??

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Don Matthews

Sun 1st Dec 2019 01:29

I can't find brown paper. Is Christmas paper with Santa on OK ?

We must be careful not to excite Do too much. She's at the top of the ladda. We don't want her to fall off with our drivel 'bout vinegar/brown paper/Santa wrap do we ?

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Don Matthews

Sat 30th Nov 2019 22:08

Thale here again Po. We must be quiet because Don doesn't know I'm talking to you. I'm from Mt Olympus and therefore unfamiliar with your reference to my man being suited to vinegar and brown paper. Should I make up a paper suit for him to wear holding a glass of vinegar to sip on? It seems a strange custom in UK but you do have some funny ways there I hear.....

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Don Matthews

Sat 30th Nov 2019 21:23

Thale here Po. Good to see Do at the top of the ladda. Hope she don't fall off with excitement like my man.......

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Do.RoThy

Sat 30th Nov 2019 16:06

Imagination has wings
So lmme fly high
Soar to fairy land
Far beyond the sky

Jack is phil
Phil is imagination
Read the poem
And enjoy no rhythm

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Don Matthews

Sat 30th Nov 2019 10:46

Thale's asking who's this Jack?

Dunno pet. Sounds like a fairy tale.....

I haven't heard this one before......

Me neither. Ladda/fall leading to nursie sleepabye? Gotta be a fairy tale Thale....

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