I swim against sand
Me and my soul live on an isolated island, all luscious and green
Multicoloured sand encompasses my haven like a boa-constrictor
At the fusion betwixt yellow and green a loosing battle rages
At each tightening the snakes’ grip, the very life force drains away
Sitting on D.I.Y chair, beneath a palm tree, I sip Coconut Milk
Reviewing battle plans, planning escape strategies, killing the snake
Reaching for my binoculars I scan the horizon between each sandy peak
This ever changing tableau proffers glimpses of other sanctuaries
A sobering sight of the bare bones of ideas of escape to larger green specks
In tatters they lay like a skeleton bleached by the searing heat
Perchance I see another soul strike out to rid itself of life’s confines
I stand on my chair to cheer him on, willing an unfortunate soul victory
Drama upon drama, his vessel of words is pounded by mountainous waves
Vessel splinters into a million verbal expressions, he falls into the sea of sand
I hear his screams as the sand closes around him, pulling him down
All I see now is for arm sticking above the sand, flesh stripped
Was this a warning to me, this skeletal beacon waving bony hand, a mock hi-five
I slump in my chair, I look around, my oasis has been reduced by half, cant breath
There is nothing for it, I must escape, I walk into the sand and start swimming
At once the grains of sand attempt to consume me, I hear trillions of tiny voices
Each voice echoes the nerve pulses of my brain; ideas, low self-esteem, the what ifs’
They ware away my flesh like sand paper smoothes the rough wood
Suddenly the sand gives way and I am sucked into a vortex, I stood no chance
Down to its centre I sank and with one final effort failing disappeared, was my soul lost
It seemed only moments later when the sand spat me out pushing me to one side
My soul awoke, coughing up grit, but otherwise ok on a luscious green island
I look up and saw hand of God release his grip of this sand timer hour glass
I could just make out an instruction on its side, turn life upside down in one hour
Life goes on; I build another chair and plan once more towards an unknown future
Will I succeed or stumble along like everybody else? Will my soul find a mate?
Each time I pass through the vortex, I hope that I grow a little wiser
Are we not all just drifters, lost in time, flotsam on the sea of sand?
As we pass by all we can do is discover grains of truth, and just live
<Deleted User> (4281)
Thu 21st Feb 2008 04:08
Hello Philip
WOW!! This is very magical and dreamy - tried to imagine being a passenger on this trip to that magical Island. Meeting all the souls there and drinking coconut milk. Sounds so good to be true. Fantastic imagination to tackle this poem...Thank you for sharing your passion for poetry...Zuzanna