The Train

by kimberly

Friday 21st February 2020 1:47 am (first posted Friday 13th December 2019 8:23 pm)

The train was moving too fast
I needed to get off
Before the crash
I needed to get out
We needed each other
To enjoy the ride
But it couldn’t last
The train was moving too fast

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Comments

Don Matthews

Sat 14th Dec 2019 02:50

Is that why I fall asleep half-way through long poems

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kimberly

Sat 14th Dec 2019 00:11

Less is more!

Don Matthews

Fri 13th Dec 2019 22:16

So good Mika. Short, succint. Says it all. My kind of poem......

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