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Breath

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Passing a palate with foul halitosis,

is truly the nastiest thing you can do.

The camels are quite

the worst beasts in the zoo.


But shiny white gates to

a breath sweet as heaven,

stand ready to open

each time I kiss you.

◄ Breakfast

Brothers ►

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clarissa mckone

Thu 21st Feb 2008 15:26

haha very funny one. It is great!

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