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For Fortune

 

We met again, in the rain this time
on bikes, in a road
with my tongue knotting, hands shaking, 
the bird in my mouth, fluttering— 
                                      my knees were weak
wobbled, toppled, 
                                      fell off to the pavement
the bike wrapped around me like an exhausted
lover, 
          rain pooled in my clenched lids. 

I opened my eyes, you there leaning, 
breath tasted like kindness, 
irises broke a melody in two
                                      beat through me. 

You asked, 
                                       (I was stunned by your beauty) 
                   whether I wanted to go for tea
and whether I was okay
                   I smiled before I spoke
my voice guttered, quivered, choked

the cars made a line behind
horns wailed
we didn’t care.

- M. R. Wallis

 

again, from the collection I'm completing

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Comments

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Steven Dark

Sat 10th Apr 2010 12:09

I like both the imagery and structure of this piece. Complementary and expressive.

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kealan coady

Fri 9th Apr 2010 19:56

Well layed out and fluent.

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Donna Marie Beck

Fri 9th Apr 2010 18:19

Hey,
i really like the line 'the bike wrapped around me like an exhsausted lover' its a good description. i have come off of mine afew times,Donna.

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 9th Apr 2010 18:12

Sorry Max - this is getting boring now - you're just SO GOOD! ;-) And don't change your picture, never be ashamed of being young! xx

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