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Four Rings

A solitary ring of gold marks marks the move from child to man,

Gifted by the man who brought this child into the world,

One more golden band sits, third finger, left hand,

And represents true, undying love for the girl,

Then one of Titanium holds the strength of forty years,

And represents the gift of truly knowing who I am,

And finally the largest, cast in silver, represents the fears,

I cast into the endless pit of doubt, because I can.

Four rings, each a gift for my own children and one for my wife,

Each a silent marker of a milestone achieved,

Each a silent witness to the path that I've walked in my life,

Each a silent thank you for the gifts I have received.

🌷(5)

◄ Enough

Yesterdays Tomorrows ►

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Jason Bayliss

Fri 3rd Jan 2020 13:58

Thanks Kev, I've got a few friends who would also never wear a ring. I think it's just a personal preference thing, like you say. I've always viewed rings as significant jewellery, i.e. I would never wear one just for the sake of it, but it's also true to say they can be dangerous. I know someone who ripped a finger off by getting their ring caught on a lorry door as they jumped out of the cab, and there's a famous outdoorsman called Dave Canterbury who obviously doesn't like them either 'cos he's got his wedding ring tattooed on his third finger.

J. x

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kJ Walker

Thu 2nd Jan 2020 23:45

I liked this one Jason even though I have never actually worn a ring of any description myself.
I have been happily married for over 30 years, but would never wear a ring. I don't know if that makes me old fashioned or weird. It's just my personal thing.

As ever your rhyming is sublime.

Another gem.

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Jason Bayliss

Thu 2nd Jan 2020 18:29

Thanks Po, so glad you liked it, it was a little message of explanation for those that keep asking. And thank you Dorothy, rings and the fingers you choose to wear them on have deep cultural significance, but also, I think it's more what they mean to you. Of all pieces of jewelry rings, I think, are the most significant.

J. x

Do.RoThy

Thu 2nd Jan 2020 15:04

This is beautiful description of rings....i never knew it....thnx for sharing J.

I just knew about engagement ring, wedding ring and anniversary rings....Hahaha!!!

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