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First Sonnet

Was it for this we nailed him to a tree,

Spat at his face and mocked him in his pain,

This bigot’s venom, cursing refugees,

This bully, battering woman’s fragile frame,

These schools, where in the guise of Charity,

We dress our sons to kill for national pride,

Our sons, marched off to war’s insanity,

Our sons we mourn, yet whom we’ve crucified ?

We raise up temples to the God of War,

Slay innocence, strike fear in all mankind;

How can the dove of peace be free to soar,

If hearts of stone and closed minds make us blind?

     If I can change the world, here I will start:

     Let no-one be a stranger in my heart.

◄ Third Sonnet

Addendum di dum di dum di dum di dum to my First Sonnet. Yeah, sodit who cares! ►

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 13th Apr 2010 18:20

This is very good.
The final couplet is excellent. I think perhaps a colon after 'start' might be better, but that's just a very minor point.

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