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Expats

After shedding Pennine tears

they fled the rain and men of Yorkshire

to learn the sevillana

under Andalusian skies.

 

Angry and passionate flamenco:

the teacher reproved them for smiling.

The four-part sevillana was another matter,

something that everyone could master.

 

Not all Marbella expats sit in beach bars

nursing a beer, a grudge, and the Daily Mail.

A blue and white traje de flamenca,

spied in a shop window, bought in Madrid,

 

three chicas guapas rubias,

stamping, clapping, spinning,

reminding locals at the annual feria

just how the dance is done.

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◄ January Swear Box

Paris 1944, 2004 ►

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Greg Freeman

Mon 20th Apr 2020 13:25

Gracias, Abdul!

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Abdul Ahmad

Mon 20th Apr 2020 10:25

Bello senor Greg

(sorry don't know how to put accent over the n in sir)

Abdul

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Greg Freeman

Mon 20th Apr 2020 08:46

John, thanks for stumbling upon Expats - and thanks for the accents tip. I thought I'd checked all the Spanish spellings with my daughter, but I agree, there's no accent there on Google. No feria dancing at the moment for obvious reasons - and she now has two very young children - but I believe her two-year-old daughter already has her first feria dress. I posted this as one of a handful of poems during Britain's last week of membership of the EU at the end of January, before other matters became the focus of our thoughts. Here's to more dancing when all this is over. PS Flamenco guitar? I'm very impressed.

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john short

Sun 19th Apr 2020 20:17

Hi Greg

Love the poem. Back in the 90s I used to play Flamenco guitar for a roomfull of English wannabe flamenco dancers. Some important visitors. Good times. Hate to be a pedantic pain but 'Sevillanas' doesn't have an accent over the N (100% sure about that). I'll now read the rest of your poems.

John S

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Greg Freeman

Wed 29th Jan 2020 12:44

Thanks for your comments, Brian and Phil!

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Tue 28th Jan 2020 19:09

Me gusta!

Philipos

Tue 28th Jan 2020 17:56

How interesting about the expats. My grandson at Uni recently reminded me that a Penguin was a bird type creature (Pen) named after a Welshman called (Gwyn). Not many people knew that I'll bet - or if they did - had forgotten about it like me.

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