Can You See The Ships at Sea
The darkness finally comes
after a long battle
Two ships sail pass
this ocean blue
Sailing past each other
into the sunset
Keeping my eyes on the blue
it's all I can see
There are no ships for me
Comments
Thankyou for explaining this Mika. I didn't have a clue what was going on..
Like Graham I also am drawn into short poems.
Thanks, Graham.
I am always particularly drawn to very brief work that produces incredible fuel for thought. This is one of those. Heartfelt
Cynthia,
This was the poetic response to having 2 deaths in the same week for 2 dear friends. I couldn't see the 'ships' in front of me, only the blue.
You certainly are interesting.
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kimberly
Tue 4th Feb 2020 01:29
Thanks, Don. Sometimes it better to leave it to the reader for interpretation but looks like this one needed help. I’m glad you enjoyed it.