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Poem of a Proud Swine

pearls, despite the obnoxious initiates, belong to everyone
not silver-plated secrets to be cast based on caste
for breath is the common denominator, breath and
birth a birthright
to an Eternal realm of Rest

Gnosis is not a blood diamond
extracted from the elders before the village
is levelled overnight

it is the icy bottle of sea water
on a hot day you envision drinking
but await the raft to strike land
before dowsing in the well-tested spring surrounded
by horns and haloes
with identical whispers:

‘We’ve got Soma, you know’

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â—„ Blame Is In The Eye Of The Beholder

Lyra, I Barely Know Ye â–º

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kealan coady

Wed 19th Feb 2020 12:08

Hi Keith thanks again bud. A publisher has agreed to finance a book from me so it's in. The works ?

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keith jeffries

Wed 19th Feb 2020 12:06

Kealan,

You have a very fertile imagination which comes to the fore in nearly all your poetry. You are a natural. Your work has a unique quality, original and the product of a person well read. Publish!!!!

Thanks for this
Keith

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