First page of my new book out soon critique needed 

 

1st page of my new book, critique needed, ty

 

ForeThoth

Suffering
like a flower you learn
to live with       it’s there,  you hear it
smell it         taste it              see it in
the careful patterns of people
whose wires work well

Suffering
and the parody of Paradise, of
false prophets, well-groomed
apostles and truth subscriptions

but you only ever cost yourself
and the price of the sacrifice is consent

you must consent to sacrifice your mind
before proceeding to read this manuscript
this is your only warning

The Trinity is Thrice Great
But the ALL is ALL
God Bless

Kealan Coady
3/3/2020