Thank you for the comments M.C. the human mind. Who can fathom it?
T.C. x
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
I didn't know that Amazon
Sold animals to you
How do they dk deal with
Deal with transit poo?
Your cat's would be quite miniscule
A dribble in the box
But elephants from Amazon?
Shit! boulders, no not rocks
Don't mock me gentle reader
Amazon's power has grown
The next thing they'll be doing
Is sending 'phants on drones
(Watch out for falling boulders...) ?
Comment is about Amazon.Com (blog)
Original item by d.knape
Thank you for your comment Jon, I value them immensely..?
Comment is about Jon Stainsby (poet profile)
Original item by Jon Stainsby
Disconcerting stuff - leaving readers to come up with their own
imaginings about what had gone on. But the lines about the curtain
are real Alfred Hitchcock material (so to speak)..
Comment is about A Gap in a Curtain (blog)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
Many thanks for this "hoot and a holler" bit of fun. The pay-off was
perfect.
Comment is about The Day That Our Dad Came Home Sober (blog)
Original item by kJ Walker
The Compliments of the Season to you too. ?
Comment is about Have a happy Christmas all (blog)
Original item by Wendy Higson
Amazon customer service actually answered a call? I bow in
deepest respect to your Missus.
When checked for damage, did the cat say "Me...oww!"?
Comment is about Amazon.Com (blog)
Original item by d.knape
Thank you, Po.
I am very glad it brought back happy memories for you.
Comment is about Lark song (blog)
Original item by Jon Stainsby
Thanks for your take on this Po. Not sure if that meant under the covers or not - if so then yes, it has been known. Cheers!
Ray
Comment is about DARK WANTON (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Harrowing. Beautifully written, Taylor. ?
Comment is about A Gap in a Curtain (blog)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
Thank you, Taylor. You are always so kind.
?
Comment is about Lark song (blog)
Original item by Jon Stainsby
Thank you Anya and Ghazala..?
Comment is about A Gap in a Curtain (blog)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
Thank you for the likes and comments...
Brian it was at the time, but she has a lovely family and a successful career. Although at times she still has those same feelings.
Comment is about A Gap in a Curtain (blog)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
A poignant poem Jon. As always with your poetry it has a beauty within its imagery..?
Comment is about Lark song (blog)
Original item by Jon Stainsby
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Sat 15th Dec 2018 18:19
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Sat 15th Dec 2018 14:10
<Deleted User> (16837)
Sat 15th Dec 2018 13:32
It happens that the moments just crawl when distance is short and year goes in a flash when in turmoil.
True love can never be stolen or feels any temptations by beetles or flowers in the world.....it stays sincerely in love with one.
Very beautiful sir!!!!
Comment is about For You (That's Far but Near) (blog)
Original item by Suko Waspodo
Big Sal
Sat 15th Dec 2018 12:04
Great poem and sentiment for this. The castle line shines.
The promise is often more alluring than the journey to obtain the riches from said promise.
Comment is about Casino dreams (blog)
Original item by Leah
<Deleted User> (18980)
Sat 15th Dec 2018 11:56
A harrowing time Taylor...good to have a forum to express your feelings.
Comment is about A Gap in a Curtain (blog)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
What a brilliant poem K.J. I can relate to this..we were due to go on a day trip to the Isle of Man as kids. Dad gambled the money away and we just had a pkt of custard creams to take between the three of us and mum.
I look back now and smile and even laugh at some of the carryings on. At the time it was hard..poor mum..
The last stanza is perfect..
Comment is about The Day That Our Dad Came Home Sober (blog)
Original item by kJ Walker
Sat 15th Dec 2018 11:20
thanks M.C. (master of ceremonies.)
for visiting and commenting.
what you say is what I think.
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Sister Norma you can't touch
I got in first , life is such
Sorry mate, she is quite naughty
And no she's not, nowhere near fourty
Norm she's shown me tricks that would
Raise the hackles in your neck
Yep , she's naughty and she's nice
Damn! I'm now a bloody wreck
Should've stayed away from Norm
Thought I could control this storm
Knew our God would punish me
Dabbling in his nunnery ?
Comment is about Sisters are a Funny Mix (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
<Deleted User> (18980)
Sat 15th Dec 2018 10:13
Come on Don...get those neurons working.
I had you nailed on to do 'Sister Norma, the naughty novice nun'
Comment is about Sisters are a Funny Mix (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
Absolutely fantastic Chris...I can imagine reading this to my grandchildren sat before an open fire...it's a keeper. Thank you for sharing...?
Comment is about The Ghost of Christmas Passed (blog)
Original item by Chris Armstrong
A day that brought you all great strife
A day that cut you like a knife
A day that tore you all apart
Your sister tried to take her life
Comment is about A Gap in a Curtain (blog)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
Made me laugh thank you M.C. ?
Comment is about SIBLING SENTIMENT - a Saturday theme poem (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Thankyou for your comments having ten young ten young men in my family from six to Fifty two most work hard and all respect one another . I’m very lucky They all know that things don’t come easy and have never expected all for nothing they make me very proud Regards Wendy Merry Christmas .
Comment is about THE KNIFE AND GUN (blog)
Original item by Wendy Higson
<Deleted User> (18980)
Sat 15th Dec 2018 07:07
I hated my sister for years growing up. I would say she was ugly...turns out she and I look almost identical.
Comment is about SIBLING SENTIMENT - a Saturday theme poem (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Observing others from the corner of a cafe is rewarding Peter ?
Comment is about RAILWAY EXPERIENCE (blog)
Original item by Peter Taylor
Could it be?
You and she
Might have had
A disagree?
Maybe I read
Between lines wrong
Maybe you didn't
Get along?
I hesitate
To post comment
In case it is
Not straight, but bent
Then again
Could silly me
Simply misinterpret
Your poetry? ?
Comment is about SIBLING SENTIMENT - a Saturday theme poem (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Simple and stimulating. Taking it further...
"Imagine" and "Supposing"
Are also worth proposing. ?
As for commenting - sometimes, the work in
question does not resonate sufficiently or can have some similarity to an entry from another source - or, is so full of conceit, it's
just not worth the effort without seeming to]
be argumentative or worse!
Comment is about What Ifs And Maybes (blog)
Original item by d.knape
Sat 15th Dec 2018 00:10
did you realize you sent the same comment
four times?
at least that's how it came to me.
but good to hear from you again
i was wondering what happened to you
now i am 4 times blessed.
Comment is about Taylor Crowshaw (poet profile)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
Well done Peter..well deserved recognition of an excellent poem and poet..?
Comment is about The Write Out Loud Poem of the Week is ‘Waking up to Snow’ by Peter Taylor (article)
Original item by steve pottinger
Po, I agree cats do have servants..in, out....tapping at my window right this minute..?
Anya, I think children always remember with fondness a beloved pet.?
Brian, You are right dogs are so happy to see their owners.
Big Sal, I hope you managed to steer your wife away from this poem...
Jennifer, Pets are the ultimate stress busters..xx
Comment is about Our Pets (blog)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
Great poem Janey. 'deck the malls with a thousand trolleys'- choice line ?
Comment is about Christmas Is Ridiculous (blog)
Original item by Janey Colbourne
Thank you everyone for the likes and comments:
Charlotte, Alexander, Jon, Don..
Comment is about Our Pets (blog)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
Last two lines sum it up D.K. could be they are just excuses, on occasion..?
Comment is about What Ifs And Maybes (blog)
Original item by d.knape
In the dangerous days of the American West, a certain watchful
James Butler "Wild Bill" Hickok used to sit with his back to the wall,
except for one time when he got careless playing cards and was
shot from behind, the cards from his "dead man's" hand (Aces and
Eights) being noted and named as such thereafter. People-watching
- especially from a safe position - can be an informative useful pastime!
Comment is about From Corner Looking Out (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
The theme is well taken.
Unfortunately, Santa is not a known presence in the lands that need
peace the most.
Comment is about The Ghost of Christmas Passed (blog)
Original item by Chris Armstrong
Much truth in these lines but, somehow, the pleasure always manages to seep through the "early days commerce" that we live
with nowadays. Even Tiny Tim would have his nose pressed up
against the window of a toy shop despite his parents' poverty-led
place in life. The theme that continues is the importance of a loving
family and the generosity of good caring friends.
Ebenezer Scrooge was Charles Dickens' stooge
To what is vital still;
The love of those who mean the most
And the generous spirit of good will.
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Comment is about Christmas Is Ridiculous (blog)
Original item by Janey Colbourne
Beautiful! so true that they give you so much more than they require. Always ready to come anywhere with you or fall in with your plans, always welcoming and never cross or sarky.
Jennifer
Comment is about Our Pets (blog)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
Thanks poemagraphic and MCN for your kind words. Glad it was good for at least a giggle! Thanks also Taylor and Don for their likes.
Jennifer
Comment is about Ho ho ho! (blog)
Original item by Jennifer Malden
Wow! Fantastic - liked the last two lines as ending!
Jennifer
Comment is about The Ghost of Christmas Passed (blog)
Original item by Chris Armstrong
DESMOND CHILDS
Sun 16th Dec 2018 08:55
Thank you po for the comment, and Anya and Taylor for the likes. Much appreciated.
All the bes des
Comment is about Gaze of time (blog)
Original item by DESMOND CHILDS