Last two lines Damon just wonderful....?
Comment is about Fix Myself (blog)
Original item by Mikey V Kinsey
Ray, I was just talking with the farrier yesterday (while he pared my donkeys hooves) about the hunting season here in Ireland starting soon. How those, who profess to love and treat their horses and dogs well; then proceed to hunt down mercilessly what is virtually another dog to be torn apart and revel in the spectacle. Sorry but your wonderfully evocative poem brought forth this volley of words..❤
Comment is about HUNTER'S MOON (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Thank you David, I will check out your other work...?
Comment is about A MAN HOLDING HIS HORSE (blog)
Original item by David Subacchi
Beautiful Candice...thank you ?
Comment is about A Million Ordinaries (blog)
Original item by Candice Reineke
Liz Jolly
Thu 25th Oct 2018 07:24
It was a brilliant performance Kyle, and I really look forward to seeing you again and hearing more of your words.
Comment is about Notes from a Poetry Crowd Surfer (article)
Original item by Mike Took
Martin you will 'phew' at me but, I think Anglesey has been drawn by your words.
Comment is about out there (blog)
Original item by Martin Elder
mm Ray
I wonder
2nd line 2nd verse
holds it
Tommy
Comment is about HUNTER'S MOON (blog)
Original item by ray pool
We too have a canal route part-way into Selby, Hugh. At the moment, though, the A19 is closed for bridge repairs for 3 months. Yip-ti-doodle! It means we can bike up the A19 as there's hardly any traffic on it.
Comment is about ROOM FOR FALLING OFF (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Cycling is such an enjoyable experience,an aerobic exercise.But the drawback is the danger.I cycle every day rain or shine,but am fortunate to reside near a canal which is sometimes bumpy but flat and car and truck free.Unfortunately in the last few days two cyclists have been killed in my area.I always give a cyclist a wide birth when driving and ALWAYS indicate when overtaking.Think bike.
Comment is about ROOM FOR FALLING OFF (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
You can find many more of my poems on Write Out Loud and also by simply searching on line for DAVID SUBACCHI POET.
Comment is about A MAN HOLDING HIS HORSE (blog)
Original item by David Subacchi
To follow,Homeless in the woods.
Comment is about "Home Lez "{my nick name} (blog)
Original item by hugh
Indeed, MC. You were lucky there was no car following you when you were knocked off.
At various times I am a motorist, a cyclist and a pedestrian, and I am quite clear which puts my life most in danger.
Comment is about ROOM FOR FALLING OFF (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Wed 24th Oct 2018 21:22
a most unusual name, Caoimhe.
i wish i could pronounce it.
what is the deal?
they could not make up their minds
between Carol and Naomi?
do you live in Wyoming?
and then on top of that....June Jane?
did you make this up?
Comment is about Caoimhe June Jane Ryan (poet profile)
Original item by Caoimhe June Jane Ryan
I spent decades cycling in and around central London and
my final days on a bike were highlighted (read: blighted!)
by a young guy who opened his car door (one of those that stretch half way along the body and measure a few
intrusive feet when opened) and gave me no chance to
avoid it. Luckily, in the context of things, I was not being
followed by traffic at that moment as I tumbled across the
road towards the middle. The second was a sudden front
wheel puncture which hurled me sideways on to my hip
so rapidly that I didn't know what had happened for a few
numbing seconds. Bike riders can be victims of cruel
fate no matter how careful they might be. But car drivers
can help (and I'm one) by "thinking bike" before any
action, in or out of traffic.
Comment is about ROOM FOR FALLING OFF (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
<Deleted User> (18980)
Wed 24th Oct 2018 18:58
Just looked up Dutch Reach...what a great thing...surprised I haven't heard of it before, particularly as I go cycling in Netherlands for a week every year and greatly admire their bike infrastructure.
Comment is about ROOM FOR FALLING OFF (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
The other hazard motorists are blind to, Brian, is flinging open the driver's door. It is wise for a cyclist to give a wide berth to a line of parked cars, even if this means holding up a car wanting to overtake him/her. Which wins in a risk assessment - the motorist's impatience or the cyclist's life?
Dutch Reach.
Comment is about ROOM FOR FALLING OFF (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
<Deleted User> (18980)
Wed 24th Oct 2018 18:06
As a long time cyclist I heartily agree with your sentiment John. Motorists need to bear in mind that whilst they can go across any road blemish, the two feet at the edge which cyclists use is disproportionately blighted by potholes, ill-fitting or missing drain covers etc etc which cause a cyclist the need to move out a little to negotiate.
Okay, I know car drivers will will unite against me but if we are serious about climate change, the future of the planet and personal health we need to use our cars less and cycle/walk more.
I too am a motorist - I have a Mini Cooper, electric blue with go-faster stripes. I don't use it much, I prefer my bike, but when I do drive I wear aviator sunglasses. Well you've got to haven't you?
Comment is about ROOM FOR FALLING OFF (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Thank you for the comment. And yes please on the chocolate!
Comment is about Home for the holidays (blog)
Original item by Maxine
Your poems are amazing love Wendy x
Comment is about Telling Me What To Do (blog)
Original item by d.knape
<Deleted User> (18980)
Wed 24th Oct 2018 15:15
Hey Knapey..have you been looking in my 'ideas' box?
Nice one.
Comment is about Telling Me What To Do (blog)
Original item by d.knape
Haha! This made me laugh, I love it?
Comment is about Telling Me What To Do (blog)
Original item by d.knape
Her orders are the glue...love it...get well soon...?
Comment is about Telling Me What To Do (blog)
Original item by d.knape
Big Sal
Wed 24th Oct 2018 14:11
Big Sal
Wed 24th Oct 2018 14:02
The irony never ceases.
Comment is about Breathing Underwater (blog)
Original item by Mikey V Kinsey
Big Sal
Wed 24th Oct 2018 13:58
When I first read this, my mind read "humble bumble bees" for some reason. .
The topic is top notch (definitely worth writing about if nothing more than to raise awareness of a few folk that matter and can make a difference), the rhythm and rhyme leave nothing to chance, and the way the playful beginning weaves with the serious ending has a way of imitating bathos without fully engaging in it.
I think you have a winner here, Ian. Enjoyable read to be sure.
Comment is about A Sting In The Tale (blog)
Original item by Ian Whiteley
Big Sal
Wed 24th Oct 2018 13:54
I can't help but feel that the fountain pen is the real star of the story. .
Interesting read Ray, as it is almost always intellectually stimulating to read the articulated views of others.
?
Comment is about CONFLICTING INTERESTS (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Big Sal
Wed 24th Oct 2018 13:50
Knowledge comes not with age or maturity, but the ability to tell the difference.
Introspective piece. The sunset line shines brightly today.?
Comment is about 24 (blog)
Original item by Jenny jeong
Big Sal
Wed 24th Oct 2018 13:42
Wed 24th Oct 2018 12:41
Your best one yet Wendy. Thank you. Jemima.
Comment is about We Will Remember (blog)
Original item by Wendy Higson
Great work Kyle. You read really well and had the whole room's attention. You should be proud and I look forward to hearing you 'live' again.
Might I suggest though that you invest in a lighter wheelchair or possibly look into Dalek technology so you can float down those stairs?
Comment is about Notes from a Poetry Crowd Surfer (article)
Original item by Mike Took
Wed 24th Oct 2018 11:26
Amazingly beautiful Taylor. Thank you. Jemima.
Comment is about The Death of Love (blog)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
Happy bithday Jenny writing to write out loud you will never be lonely again .Writing your feelings down gets you many friends you don’t know them . But it makes you feel your not alone lots of love Wendy x
Comment is about 24 (blog)
Original item by Jenny jeong
<Deleted User> (18980)
Wed 24th Oct 2018 08:17
You want news unfettered?
Make it bi-colour lettered
Comment is about Pink and Black Font. Sorted (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
I enjoyed this poem, it kept me hooked Ray. ?
Comment is about CONFLICTING INTERESTS (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Congratulations, Katlego
Comment is about The Write Out Loud Poem of the Week is ‘Light - O’ - Love’ by Katlego Maake Jr (article)
Original item by steve pottinger
Tue 23rd Oct 2018 23:11
Read your response and honestly
your rhyme was rightly spun,
All I can say is thank you to
you rhyming son of a gun!
?
Comment is about Don Matthews (poet profile)
Original item by Don Matthews
<Deleted User> (18980)
Tue 23rd Oct 2018 23:07
Interesting Ray. I'm picturing a bored rich wife who fancies herself as a writer but is easily distracted. I assume her husband is an oil executive. She would rather be in London with her socialite friends. Did she sleep with the plumber or just help to bend his pipe?
Comment is about CONFLICTING INTERESTS (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Wonderful tribute and plea to bees Ian. I see almost an air force with a single mind. Added pleasure in the rhyming, a joy to read. I like the softness of the words in the poem in contrast to the subject.
Ray
Comment is about A Sting In The Tale (blog)
Original item by Ian Whiteley
Hi Damon, thank you for taking the time to read and give likes to some of my work. It is really appreciated. Thank you..?
Comment is about Mikey V Kinsey (poet profile)
Original item by Mikey V Kinsey
<Deleted User> (18980)
Tue 23rd Oct 2018 17:51
A great sentiment, great rhyming, and it's got a real buzz to it.
Comment is about A Sting In The Tale (blog)
Original item by Ian Whiteley
Thanks for the comments on 'Blood Brothers In Arms' Jennifer. My dad was in Burma in the 2nd WW and fought alongside the Gurkas - he always said they were the most loyal, hard-working and ferocious fighters that you could wish for. He had a saying 'Good Old Johnny Gurka', I still remember that fondly
Glad you liked the poem
Ian
Comment is about Jennifer Malden (poet profile)
Original item by Jennifer Malden
great writing! very moving. In the war cementery here about one third of the soldiers are Ghurkas, about 700. As they were fighting in the Appennines and they were the only mountain troops we had.
Jennifer
Comment is about Blood Brothers In Arms (blog)
Original item by Ian Whiteley
Thanks for the comments and likes you lot - I really appreciate it
Ian
Comment is about Blood Brothers In Arms (blog)
Original item by Ian Whiteley
Thanks for your comments on 'Blood Brothers In Arms' Mark - I think we're on the same page on this one :-)
Ian
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Thanks for your insightful comments on 'Blood Brothers In Arms' John - glad you liked it. I'm pleased about your churches stance on symbolism - I think too many people get wound up about symbols when it is the act of remembering human suffering that is the crucial point - and by that I mean ALL human suffering of any race, creed or culture
cheers mate
Ian
Comment is about John Coopey (poet profile)
Original item by John Coopey
Dk you're poem interests me
How do I give reply?
My mind is ticking silently
What would he like, and why
You have been very generous
To send it through freight-free
Not a lot of poets would
Be so kind to me
You offered me a free trial
dk how kind you are
Free trials are now unheard of
Cash please, or au revoir
You will be pleased to know dk
No spell errors found
The punctuation perfect
It's content did abound
Your warranty left me agog
Guaranteed for life!
It never will disintegrate?
And leave a jumbled strife
From all the praise I've given here
I do not have to hide
I like your poem very much
I'm completely satisfied ?
Comment is about Guarantee (blog)
Original item by d.knape
Taylor Crowshaw
Thu 25th Oct 2018 08:10
Hi John, Great poem. I live in rural Ireland. When we relocated 25yrs ago I brought my bike as I love to cycle I have used it twice, it is treacherous walking or riding a bike here. There is nowhere for the cyclist to go if a car passes. At least if you are walking you can climb into the ditch (if you are quick enough).?
Comment is about ROOM FOR FALLING OFF (blog)
Original item by John Coopey