HI Suki. I worked for the BBC and a government ministry and was familiar with the kind of Orwellian double think stuff before computers took over churned out day by day before being shredded. Mind numbing stuff, the sort of thing that almost made the world go backwards.
Thanks for posting. Excellent stuff.
Ray

Comment is about A Notice To All Interested Stakeholders Of This Blog (blog)

Original item by Suki Spangles

Hi Desmond,

Turbid ~ a top poetry word, and perfect for this poem>

Haunting verse, Poe-like. That's a compliment btw.

Thanks for sharing.

Suki

Comment is about Seeping River (blog)

Original item by DESMOND CHILDS

Hi all,

Graham ~ if I ever have to work in that postcode area I think I will cry a lot. Years ago I worked in Soho, but in a shelter opposite the Groucho Club.. Need I say more!

Col ~ You are nearer to the truth than you think! I laughed reading this. My method now is I write pretty much all my poems on a note document on my mobile phone during my commutes, and then at home I work on the final draft before uploading on my blog, and sometimes here on WOL. You are right though, I stare out into the middle distance often, and I have missed my stop sometimes..

David ~ I agree totally: show don't tell.
I wrote this poem a few years back, and I revisited it last week to tweak and edit. The inspiration for this was a wacky Human Resources document that was even worse than the crap in my poem. Then I watched the Bjork video, and my aha! moment arrived.

Thank you all for your kind words, and Likes too Glad it put a smile on your faces. Job done. I had great fun writing, and then rewriting this.

Suki

Comment is about A Notice To All Interested Stakeholders Of This Blog (blog)

Original item by Suki Spangles

Thanks Suki for your encouraging words on "I wish, But."

Happy Reading and Writing,
Ankita ?

Comment is about Suki Spangles (poet profile)

Original item by Suki Spangles

You have managed to create a picture of your loved one the fun you had the times together his blue eyes the closeness of your relationship then the sorrow of his declining health so very true in many of our lives when we are faced with losing some one we truly love.
I've just read a picture of your loved one and seen the person that he is .
Well done Paul. Christine

Comment is about A Picture of You (blog)

Original item by Pauliegreg

Ha ha the sea dog he had us all with that one so funny and a typical day out at the seaside making your fun alas does not seem to tbe around in these modern times .
Great fun summer Southport days I remember them well.
Christine

Comment is about The Sea Dog (blog)

Original item by Jon Darby

Touching sad thought full this poem just takes the reader on an unknown journey into the life of a lonely man re ching out for acceptance .
Loved the last stanza were you met up with him once again we have a long way to go but poems like this change our perseptions.
Thank you and keep these poems coming look forward to your next one .
Always thought provoking.
Christine

Comment is about Remembering James (blog)

Original item by Jon Darby

Witty and smart Jennifer and nicely turned; well said.

Ray

Comment is about The boyfriend (blog)

Original item by Jennifer Malden

I really thought it was going to be a person that they were all mourning. I did like the descriptions.

Only this week I was speaking to a lady who was recently widowed, she was convinced that a new star came out on the day of her husband's death, and only reappears on the anniversary


I liked the poem by the way, especially the first line

Cheers Kevin

Comment is about 21st September (blog)

Original item by Jennifer Malden

I am pleased to know, that your interest lies with English. I have already requested Sabrina Agha, to post English translation for this poem. Hope she will do it ASAP.

Comment is about Arzoo (02) (blog)

Original item by Mirza Sharafat Hussain Beigh

Aaishah, Thank you for your comment. Keith

Comment is about The Rat Race (blog)

Original item by keith jeffries

Thanks everyone for your comments. I must have touched some nerves with those quoted lines - delving into the ridiculous I feel is a liberty that can stir the imagination. Meeting pet subjects head on I think is often not that powerful. I wanted to convey the post death confusion suffered by those at the mercy of extremists expecting something more glorious. Who knows what awaits - if anything? All you observations are appreciated. I am not on drugs by the way, but I like my ovaltine shaken not stirred.

Thank you Emer for your like on this!

Love to all . Ray

Comment is about PARADISE LOST (blog)

Original item by ray pool

Yeah Natasha, I feel the same... It has some free writing in it. I don't question the muse. Tell them to go bother Tom Waits or Lenard Cohan (RIP). Someone who can make something of the donation.

Edit (1/25/18)To build you must destroy. With the destruction we prosper but with a loss of ourselves, however slight.

Comment is about Fall and Foster (blog)

Original item by 220August

Thank you Hannah, much appreciated

Comment is about An Angel (blog)

Original item by David T Jones

Thanks for the comment Col, I had no idea how this one was going to work out. I'm glad it gave you a gentle landing.

Comment is about Beatification and snacks (blog)

Original item by David T Jones

Cheers Col, I can see how addictive they are, great discipline though.

Comment is about Being (blog)

Original item by David T Jones

Thanks Keith and thanks Colin, your feedback is much appreciated ?

Comment is about Raking up the past (blog)

Original item by David T Jones

You could get a job on the team at W1A

Comment is about A Notice To All Interested Stakeholders Of This Blog (blog)

Original item by Suki Spangles

Colin, David and Desmond, thank you for your comments on The Rat Race. They are much appreciated. Keith

Comment is about The Rat Race (blog)

Original item by keith jeffries

careful David, they can become addictive! I have a tendency of spewing them out on Twitter - mainly for my own amusement! - especially as this type of micro-poetry fits easily within the 140 character limit. good luck with your haiku career should you decide to embark on it. cheers. col.

Comment is about Being (blog)

Original item by David T Jones

how did I miss this beauty. totally wow and awesome. I hope my comment draws more readers back to it. glad I found it. cheers. col.

Comment is about Raking up the past (blog)

Original item by David T Jones

you lifted me up and dropped me back to earth so gently with the promise of 'hot chocolate, warm crumpets and a fine autumn day'. I now feel suitably beatified and snacked out. Sunday bliss and as Keith said, masterful. Cheers David. Col.

Comment is about Beatification and snacks (blog)

Original item by David T Jones

love it Mike - one of those poems I imagine is difficult to stop writing when the mind is in full flow. Col.

Comment is about You're Fizzy (blog)

Original item by mike booth

the twenty-first century satirical post-rock humorist at his finest with a little help from the Icelandic berserkur.

I always picture you sitting in an office staring out the window composing your pieces and quite lost to your thoughts. perhaps your work colleagues muttering to themselves: ah there he goes again, lost to his poetry. until you are snapped back to reality by the rattle of the tea trolley. I'm sure your life is nothing like that but I like to imagine.

you remain, dear sir, a source of much inspiration. btw I mentally added in passing the word 'spin' between 'spiritual' and 'cycle'. hope you don't mind?

cheers. col.

Comment is about A Notice To All Interested Stakeholders Of This Blog (blog)

Original item by Suki Spangles

with greatest of respect Mirza could you provide an English translation please?



P&S xx

Comment is about Arzoo (02) (blog)

Original item by Mirza Sharafat Hussain Beigh

and us beatlemaniacs agree.



P&S xx

Comment is about Yesterday (blog)

Original item by Tim Ellis

Hi Greg. I cld have sworn that the number of days left before close had been stated as 27 - but it's (now) 57, so no discrepancy! Apols.
Peter

Comment is about Deadline nears for Wolf poetry competition (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Thanks Keith ?

Comment is about Beatification and snacks (blog)

Original item by David T Jones

I would like to thank everybody who congratulate me on my poem Elegant Lies being POTW. I take great encouragement from the comments made. I would also like to thank everybody at WOL for giving me the opportunity to post my work, which would probably not see the light of day otherwise.
I think there are many good poets on WOL and feel very honoured for my poem to have been chosen as POTW.

Comment is about 'Elegant Lies' by Desmond Childs is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

masterful. Keith

Comment is about Beatification and snacks (blog)

Original item by David T Jones

Prepaid funeral plan costs will go through the roof.

Harry Take comfort from the thought. At our age we'll not have to worry about the long term effects of Brexit

Comment is about A thought in an idle moment. (blog)

Original item by Harry O`N eill

David, this is very good especially the imagery in the first three lines which are superb. Thank you. Keith

Comment is about Raking up the past (blog)

Original item by David T Jones

Hi harry

I love free verse, but no one seems able to take a handful simple words and weave them together like they used to. I can't do free verse 'cos the way I see it one has to create magical original metaphors, which I'm incapable of doing, so I do rhyme instead.

Many on this site try their hand at free verse, but the resulting work, apart leaving me baffled with words unfamiliar to your average punter, needs a Bletchley code breaking brain to fathom it's intention.

Comment is about Where? (blog)

Original item by Harry O`N eill

Rose, thank you for this as it is very thought provoking. Keith

Comment is about Escape (blog)

Original item by Rose Davis

Great images! Headless chickens with beards! Sun blinding with night! Fascinating. (Who is your supplier?)

Comment is about PARADISE LOST (blog)

Original item by ray pool

The rise and fall of passion beautifully described with humour included. I enjoyed this. Thank you. Keith

Comment is about Burning Desire (blog)

Original item by mike booth

Stuart, this is masterful. The descriptive nature of this poem will stay with me for some time. Well done. Thanks. Keith

Comment is about something glows inside all of us (blog)

Original item by Stuart Buck

what a fracking great take on my fave Beatle's song!
-t'riff Tim!

Comment is about Yesterday (blog)

Original item by Tim Ellis

So much fun to write, thank you

Comment is about Sailing With The Stars (revised) (blog)

Original item by Duncan McKenzie Ross

I believe the deadline is 31 December 2017, Peter ... can you help me in locating the discrepancy about this? Thanks, Greg

Comment is about Deadline nears for Wolf poetry competition (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

Not so much a pin-up...but I'd rather have with me than
"agin me" in a spat! And if she talks "drivel" on QT, she
is hardly alone.

Comment is about JULIA HARTLEY-BREWER (blog)

Original item by M.C. Newberry

Kevin, you are right in your assessment, I should have been more specific and used the word youth so as to avoid any misunderstanding that I was referring to children, Thank you as always for your comment. As a teenager I was always disregarded as being ´unable to understand´. This demeaned me terribly. Thanks again. Keith

Comment is about The Young (blog)

Original item by keith jeffries

Philip, thank for this comment. As you will probably have gathered the High Street is far removed from England. Keith

Comment is about My High Street (blog)

Original item by keith jeffries

Cynthia, thank you for this interesting critique. You have certainly grasped my intention in writing this poem. Thank you again. Keith

Comment is about My High Street (blog)

Original item by keith jeffries

A picky point but there is a discrepancy between the closing date for entries per the headline and under the detailed rules.

Comment is about Deadline nears for Wolf poetry competition (article)

Original item by Greg Freeman

hi Keith
on first read of this I was inclined to disagree (sorry), but I suppose it depends on which age group you refer to as "the young". personally I believe you should talk to children in language and using content appropriate to their age.
Kids grow up too quickly these days, and talking to them as adults before they are ready only accelerates this.
I'd go completely the opposite way, and say be careful what you say in front of children. their ears pick up more than you think.
If by "the young" you meant teenagers, then I am in total agreement.
The poem read nicely, just like I'd expect from one of yours, and was laced with (sage-like) words of wisdom.

Cheers Kevin

Comment is about The Young (blog)

Original item by keith jeffries

must have been really frightening, no wonder the memory stuck with you. we returned from Wales yesterday, and considered calling in at Chester Zoo on the way home. I'm glad we never now, although from what I gather they do have a good reputation on safety.

cheers kevin

Comment is about Petrified (blog)

Original item by keith jeffries

Cheers Ray ((blush))

Comment is about Brothers in bed (blog)

Original item by Tommy Carroll

Keep writing.

Comment is about Trev the Road Poet (poet profile)

Original item by Trev the Road Poet

Cool sample.

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