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Yvonne Brunton

Sat 30th Jan 2016 23:56

As they say
His money is twice tainted -
'taint yours and 'taint mine.

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John Coopey

Sat 30th Jan 2016 23:22

So would that allow anyone poor to take from anyone richer, Pat? And if so, could a third person, even poorer still, take it from them? These are some of the inconsistencies contained in Proudhon.

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David R Mellor

Sat 30th Jan 2016 22:01

Glad you caught it Stu and your warm words . Seam Less is Fb page were i do more introspective poems btw

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Emer Ni Chorra

Sat 30th Jan 2016 21:39

So very Freudian, I like this a lot :)

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Patricio LG

Sat 30th Jan 2016 21:23

Well I can see your point however surely the rich have been grand masters of theft far too long, I call it balancing the wealth. (Just a little). :-)

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 30th Jan 2016 18:15

I agree. The verses work together - like those in a song.
And they stay in the mind with their message of human
optimism.

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John Coopey

Sat 30th Jan 2016 15:02

Where would you invest it, Tim? In the Stock Market? That's where it would be forwarded to the Corporations.

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raypool

Sat 30th Jan 2016 11:32

Cheers David. A good friend of mine died yesterday and I was a bit devastated, hence the poem.

Ray

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Tim Ellis

Sat 30th Jan 2016 10:45

I think it's incorrect to say there's only 2 things to do with money, spend or save. The third option is to invest, which is slightly different to saving. £100 grand would be plenty to start up a small business and if you're smart (or ruthless!) you could turn it into millions eventually without enriching the banks unduly. Or just loan it at a good interest rate to somebody else that's running a business - that's much easier. You are right though, in that most people wouldn't think of that, and it would all end up in the hands of those that did.

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steve mellor

Sat 30th Jan 2016 09:56

Hi Pat
Really pleased you enjoyed my little tale.
It is based on a happening which occurred on the A66, whilst returning to Scotland (temporary home)
Hopefully good memories for you

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steve mellor

Sat 30th Jan 2016 09:53

Hi John
You caught the spirit, as usual.
Long time no-see, but am currently living in Scotland with new partner, and it was on the way back up north that the pheasant/quail met its end

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John Coopey

Sat 30th Jan 2016 09:04

I think that's called theft, Patricio.

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Patricio LG

Sat 30th Jan 2016 07:21

Unless they can afford to have some taken that is :/)

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Patricio LG

Sat 30th Jan 2016 07:19

Unless they can afford to have some taken that is :/)

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Patricio LG

Sat 30th Jan 2016 06:53

Sorry to hear of your loss.

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Patricio LG

Sat 30th Jan 2016 06:39

Once a castle now no doubt a nursing home. Lovely poem, sadness whiling away the days.

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raypool

Fri 29th Jan 2016 20:10

Thanks Jim. Talking of Cream, I hope you don't suffer the same problems as Jack Bruce and Ginger Baker , apparently a stabbing at one point I think !!

I admire Police as well with that line up.
Happy days. I keep playing but in the big band format.
cheers Ray

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Eric Berard

Fri 29th Jan 2016 19:46

Thank you very much :) I try to keep up the style, although fighting with anxiety sometimes my work comes out a little dark. I like these kind of pieces much better, though. I would like them to be insightful for others who may be facing battles of their own :)

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John Coopey

Fri 29th Jan 2016 17:48

No, MC, I don't think there ever was a time when wealth was distributed evenly. I don't think there ever will be and , if my dad was right, if ever there was it would soon find its way back!
I am a strong believer in a society fairer than the one we have today but my politics is not rooted in envy. I don't begrudge someone richer than me their wealth. My politics is left of centre but I've never believed that the way for me to become wealthier is to take it off someone else.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 29th Jan 2016 16:19

I agree with raypool.
To put it simply - congratulations for giving us a reason to
remember and reflect.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 29th Jan 2016 16:08

Has there ever been a period in history anywhere when
wealth was evenly distributed? It is the stuff of fantasy
and these lines remind us of that. The greatest gift
is the opportunity to make/obtain money in sufficient
quantity to provide peace of mind in accommodating the
day to day demands of life and the unknowns of the
future. If a talent enables real wealth - and we see
this every day in the realms of sport and entertainment,
(not to mention banking!), then that is the icing on the
cake. I don't often see reports of today's wealthy
being too quick to share their wealth - except in the
case of those "rich beyond the dreams of avarice" who
equate with the great philanthropists of yesteryear who
displayed a greater social conscience than those who
might be their modern counterparts.
Despite modern mankind having more of everything,
that seems to include envy and spite - the downside
of human nature and its natural quest to improve and
do better.
I'll never afford a Ferrari but I still appreciate the
quality that it represents and the fact that it is there
to be had if a talent or ablility provided me with the
cost price.

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Jim Trott

Fri 29th Jan 2016 15:44

Hi Ray

If this is the future, then I'm glad I'm too old to see much of it! These moves towards conformity are worrying; not too many steps away from the Stalin era, I fear.

Yes, a bass it is. I play in a three-piece rock band (Hendrix, Cream etc) - and I'm the youngest member!! You're never too old to rock'n'roll...........

Stay well, and have a good weekend.

Jim

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raypool

Fri 29th Jan 2016 15:07

Ah, memories brought to explicit life with verve and style. Excellent. Can't fault this in any way, not that I'd want too!

Ray

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Francine

Fri 29th Jan 2016 15:05

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raypool

Fri 29th Jan 2016 15:04

I love the direct style that tells a story with the simple and compelling way you have used here.

Quite wistful Jim.

Ray

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Stu Buck

Fri 29th Jan 2016 12:39

david,
very nearly missed this (such a lot of poetry gets put up here (i am the guiltiest party...)) but it is beautiful in its brevity, restraint and use of metaphor.

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raypool

Fri 29th Jan 2016 12:09

Cheers Jim. I'm not a dog man in general but he was a special case. You're right it elevated me for sure.

Ray

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raypool

Fri 29th Jan 2016 12:07

Thanks Jim - some vitriol in this . I'm afraid this might be the future with its conformist lemming mentality . Nice to see your picture - is that a bass? My favourite instrument as I'm a keyboard player !


Stu. This actually is drawn from someone close to home. It's hard to take the piss out of. but I like to try. He is definitely in a tug of war as a person. Thanks for your comment. Ray

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Stu Buck

Fri 29th Jan 2016 11:40

great stuff. love the phrasing. i hold a degree of sympathy for such people, they are very much crushed under the boot of western society. blame the boot not the beetle.

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Jim Trott

Fri 29th Jan 2016 04:27

I really like this one, Ray. It conjures up wonderful images.

Therapy for both parties, I think.

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Jim Trott

Fri 29th Jan 2016 04:23

Hi Ray.

I like this a lot.

Sadly, we've all met this kind of person. No substance to them; held together only by a sense of their own self-importance.

Awful, ignorant people.

And they're on the increase..........

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Adam Whitworth

Thu 28th Jan 2016 23:48

Yes, it's good! Trouble is I'm reading mainly Iris Murdoch books...my mind can only boggle.

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Eric Maehl

Thu 28th Jan 2016 22:07

Thanks for the observation. Currently reading your thoughts

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raypool

Thu 28th Jan 2016 20:23

Bless you Stu, you are my singular and select audient for this one. I had to look up thaumotrope but it was featured in the film Sleepy Hollow, which I also love.

Cheers Ray

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Jeff Dawson

Thu 28th Jan 2016 19:46

Hi Steve, great to hear from you! Fine mate, hope you're good, thanks for you comment on Diggers poem, its written as a poem, did it as I was compering Diggers festival, but potential as a song as you say, will have a look at it. Hope all good. I am in Wakefield doing a gig with Ian whiteley on afternoon of sat 20 feb if you fancy it, cheers and all the best, Jeff

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Michelle

Thu 28th Jan 2016 18:57

awwww :'( lovely

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Michelle

Thu 28th Jan 2016 17:48

Cheers for reading and commenting on 'Shelved', much appreciated.
M :)

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Jim Trott

Thu 28th Jan 2016 15:32

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed Nicole.

(Bugger. I haven't written a sequel. I wonder if I get away with changing the last line from "four" to "two"?)

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Jim Trott

Thu 28th Jan 2016 15:27

Thanks for all your comments guys. Raymond is so pleased!

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John Coopey

Thu 28th Jan 2016 14:59

I was always on the look-out, Yvonne, for a girlfriend who was an expert on horse racing and the bible. It was a bit niche.
(Just for quiz purposes you understand. I had a different job description for other nights of the week).

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Vicki Ayers

Thu 28th Jan 2016 14:44

Yes - nice Xx

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Vicki Ayers

Thu 28th Jan 2016 14:37

Oh wow - I love this - what a great way to imagine remembering someone who caused pain - I'm going to try it!! Nice one - beautifully written xx Vic xx

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Vicki Ayers

Thu 28th Jan 2016 14:31

Hi! Thanks for taking the time to read & comment on 'Open Heart Surgery' I'm glad you enjoyed it (if that's the right word!!) I look forward to delving into your words soon xx Vic xx

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Vicki Ayers

Thu 28th Jan 2016 14:29

Thanks Rachael glad you enjoyed it!

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Vicki Ayers

Thu 28th Jan 2016 14:28

Yes indeed!! It's not easy this 'love' thing - friends or otherwise!!

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Vicki Ayers

Thu 28th Jan 2016 14:24

Thanks for taking the time to read & comment on my words - I look forward to reading some more of yours xx Vic xx

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Vicki Ayers

Thu 28th Jan 2016 14:23

Thanks chaps appreciate your comments - hope things pick up for you soon Lizzie x

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Russell Thompson

Thu 28th Jan 2016 14:21

Great news! Congratulations, Steve.

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Lynn Hamilton

Thu 28th Jan 2016 13:10

Hi Wolfie

All good things come to those that wait, apparently. Thanks for reading. x

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Lynn Hamilton

Thu 28th Jan 2016 13:09

Hi Vicki

Thanks for reading (something I've been guilty of not doing recently) and commenting. x

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