Your sample poem dedicated to your wife's mum really affected me. I could feel tears welling up at all that you didn't say. You demand that your reader reads between the lines which is, in my opinion, the essental step to developing an authentic voice of your own. You have talent Jason. Use it. All good wishes, John E
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Thank you both very much, it's really nice to hear positive things.
Jason.
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You write well, and reading between the lines of your biography I would say have had an interesting, and no doubt dangerous life so far.
I look forward to reading more.
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Big Sal
Thu 17th Jan 2019 17:12
That’s a great sample you posted.???
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Jason Bayliss
Sun 3rd Feb 2019 17:42
John, thank you so much. It was a tough write, it was a difficult passing. Neuroendocrine cancer. So glad you could see what I was trying to say, thanks.
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