Hello, Tomas

Thank you for your lovely comment! Yes, you had the right feelings within the lines in my poem. Life as it happens. Often takes toll on everyone and then we feel as a bent tree that would fall if not supported by others in this case family member, friends...Etc.

Warm Regards,
Zuzanna

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Hi Tomas, thanks for comment. I've never heard 2 Unlimiteds 'Faces' so will have to see if I can give it a listen! Spooky, hope you liked it anyway, cheers Jeff

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Thank you for your comment. I am all words and no structure! You, on the other hand, have that under serious control. I love Hound for Iraq.

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Hi Tomas

thank you for your lovely comments. I think your poem 'shall another read my words' is so beautiful.
mel
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Thank you for your visit.

Although I am curious as to why you think I should rhyme more.

David

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Hello, Tomas

Thank you for the latest comments.
It happened that I was living in both systems. In addition, I see not much difference except maybe the working class divided more in a Capitalism versa Communism. Here we do have the Freedom of speech and have your own things like home., car, place to live but the prices you pay having all those goods are tremendous. It is good for those who have good paying jobs. Those who have less paying jobs, then these people live like in a Communism system. I tell you that Communism had good sites too. Like the Education for all was mandatory. Here it is slightly different. If you have money then you do not need to have University to be in Politics. In Communism system one had to be highly educated to be an Economist- this is just an example...Some people left the country and still do, I mean the Communist. Both sites have good trades and as not so good. I need to close here as my comment can go forever, Will come back to read your latest poem...Thank you.

Kind Regards,
Zuzanna

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Sorry - also wanted to share a 'hurley' poem which no-one over here (in Australia) understands... it's on my site too.

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Thanks for your comments on my site.
I've just posted a reply on there for you...
Frances

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Hi, thanks for the kind words!

I really like Big Eyes Blinking Blankly, it's incredibly powerful.

Gem :)

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Thanks for your visit, Tomas, and, in turn, I do like your meaningful traditional metre-and-rhyme; also great to see verses in Irish as I love the world being multicultural.

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hya tomas,
your stuff aint old fashioned its cool....diverse too.
the island is lovely..where did you stay?
shelley d

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Hi Tomas,
thank you for your comment on my poem.

Your poem 'Big Eye Blinking Blankly' is very powerful and exposes us here in our luxurious existence.

I like the way you switched it around at the end where the table are turned and how we might feel in the face of starvation.

Extremely sad to read but so true

thanks for sharing

Ally

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