<Deleted User> (6895)
Fri 5th Apr 2013 21:54
Good stuff Tony.xx
Comment is about Crossroad. (blog)
<Deleted User> (6895)
Fri 5th Apr 2013 21:50
<Deleted User> (6895)
Fri 5th Apr 2013 21:47
'fits' in with us quite nicely-Mr.Whiteley.xx
Comment is about Jigsaw (blog)
Original item by Ian Whiteley
No worries Alex - as I said earlier on line existence is a lot less real and not for all people. See you at the Tudor. x
Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)
Original item by Isobel
Steve,
My apologies for not recognising and speaking to you at the last`spoke`.
It was a combination of ancientness, confusion through missing the road earlier, and not seeing much of you lately at the blog (plus myself not having very much idea what one of the bloody poems I was reading was about)
I hope you are well.
Comment is about stephen smith (poet profile)
Original item by stephen smith
Just got back from seeing Frieda Hughes. Truly wonderful to hear her read poems that I've been reading for years and this brought new meaning to them.
Review is about Wenlock Poetry Festival Ian McMillan on 5 Apr 2013 (event)
Dave,
glad this was resurrected...fascinating idea.
Were the seven deadly sins ever made the subject of a comp as Anne suggested?
Comment is about Seven, lethal (blog)
Original item by Dave Bradley
thank you Jules for your very kind comments B
Comment is about LOVE NEVER DIES (blog)
Original item by BRIAN EVANS
I will agree time can be tight. But what about dropping a poetry book off at a school on the way to work or posting one?
Comment is about Poems by heart help develop 'cultural ear', says Heaney (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Hello there again Laura
Thank you for the reply and the links. I do use Facebook, mainly as an electronic pigeon and for family and friends to read what I write. As for writing exercises the idea frightens me to death. I sit, I sit, I sit. (You will notice I sit a lot). BING!!! I write and post, no thinking it just happens. When I say accidental I mean it. Its a l - o - n - g story. The feed back I have had since I started to feel worthy enough to put stuff up on here has been great, encouraging but I have to admit I do enjoy being out there and reading what I write. Eyes don't lie, if what I do is crap the eyes tell me, not the hands, they can lie everytime they politely come into contact with each other. I have also met some "interesting " people. Coincidentally, if I did write about being a part of the body it would be the eyes.
Cheers
Pete The Bus Driving Poet.
Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)
Original item by Laura Taylor
Howdy Pete
An accidental poet, eh? Pleased to make your acquaintance, from a fellow accidental poet. I hadn't written a line until September 2010 but you can't bloody stop me now ;) Good to see you are enjoying the site - I know that I wouldn't have written anywhere near as much as I have without it.
Do you use Facebook at all? We have a Write Out Loud Community page on there, and once a month, our friend Cathy Bryant puts up huge lists of comps and calls for publishing. Even if you don't send anything, they can be great 'prompts' for new poems.
Ooops - meant to give you the link https://www.facebook.com/pages/Write-Out-Loud-Community/260122457345775?fref=ts
We do writing exercises on here once a month too - look out for the next one, mid-month.
Here's another challenge for you, from a previous exercise: http://www.writeoutloud.net/public/blogentry.php?blogentryid=33608
Let me know if you write one eh? :)
Happy scribbling!
Comment is about Pete Slater (poet profile)
Original item by Pete Slater
Hi Nigel,
Thanks for your comment on my poem "The One I Love". I envy your talent.
Thank You,
Shirley
Comment is about Nigel Astell (poet profile)
Original item by Nigel Astell
Hello MC,
Thank you for your nice comments on my poem "The One I Love". I wrote this for my husband. Of course my eyes are not as sparkly as the drawing, but the sentiment is there.
Thanks again,
Shirley
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Hi Laura
Thanks for taking time to read my offering. I had written a piece about a friend of mine and the "bedroom tax" Someone kindly made a comment and pointed out that repossessed people were also traumatised. Said they had enjoyed reading and would look forward to a poem about repossession. I have never written to a theme before so I thought I would give it a go. Out of my comfort zone but it was an interesting challenge. Apologies for the novelette. Ta for the typo .... rectified.
Pete The Bus Driving Poet.
Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)
Original item by Laura Taylor
Hi, thank you for your comment on my poem.
Comment is about Mikhail Smith (poet profile)
Original item by Mikhail Smith
I like this poem's reference to the magnificent war memorial that is within the Stockport gallery - the eternal flame that will be regularly extinguished if the building is not open daily which, in turn, will be a dishonour to those who died in support of their country.
Libraries before Trident, please.
Comment is about Write Out Loud Stockport's protest and collage anthology (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Yes - good piece this, lots of valid points in it and would perform well. I liked the 'race called rat'. There's a typo I think in 'first rime buyers' - should be 'time'?
Comment is about REPOSSESSION DEPRESSION. (blog)
Original item by Pete Slater
Fri 5th Apr 2013 13:25
I love the stance of the poem and especially the verses on hawthorn,nettle and sequoia where you turn the power up.
Steve Smith
Comment is about Seven, lethal (blog)
Original item by Dave Bradley
Hi Charlie.
Thanks for taking the trouble to read my offering. A chord is struck huh? Must be doing something right. Ha. ha. The amounts of money being bandied about now for houses is boggling my mind. A two up two down terraced a BARGAIN at £100,000? If all you need is £25,000 for a deposit surely you only need dip into your back pocket for any loose change. What planet do these people live on? Glad you enjoyed it nevertheless.
Comment is about Charlie Sparkinson (poet profile)
Original item by Charlie Sparkinson
This really strikes a chord with me. Luckily or unluckily I am 30 and still renting. Property ownership for me seems as unlikely as winning the lottery. Yesterday, I viewed at tiny, shoebox apartment in a newly built complex where they were offering the option of 100% mortgage. I was told that, if I didn't have a £20,000 deposit to hand, then I'd have to pay £750 a month for the next 30 years. Unappealing and depressing. Love the poem though.
Comment is about REPOSSESSION DEPRESSION. (blog)
Original item by Pete Slater
Hi Laura
Thanks for the pointer. What an interesting magazine. I'm enjoying some of the other contributors too.
Dave
Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)
Original item by Laura Taylor
Hi Ian, yes 'Jigsaw' can be both literal and non-literal can't it. That's why it's good. Nice bit of extended metaphor. :-D
Comment is about Ian Whiteley (poet profile)
Original item by Ian Whiteley
Thanks for your comment in my poem 'How To Be Better'. Much appreciated. X
Comment is about Yvonne Brunton (poet profile)
Original item by Yvonne Brunton
hi Charlie
thanbks for commenting on 'jigsaw' I appreciate it. Don't know whether I'm being too clever for my own good on this one - but it isn't literal ;-0 although I'm happy for it to be taken literally or otherwise as long as folk like it
cheers
Ian
Comment is about Charlie Sparkinson (poet profile)
Original item by Charlie Sparkinson
I enjoyed this. Even though you've called it 'Jigsaw' I wasn't expecting it to be literal and was surprised when I realised! I'm a fool, I know.
Comment is about Jigsaw (blog)
Original item by Ian Whiteley
Now John, don't you go all doggerelophobic on me, with your Bysshe bashing, having a pop at Percy. One person's doggerel is another's popular poem - which perhaps it needed to be to take the message as widely as possible. The point here is to mark the event, not Shelley's exam paper.
I, too, aim to go, though must admit to being no fan of Mr Davies, with his patronising habit of telling his Today interviewees what they have just said.
There,I can be curmudgeonly too. Now, if I could just find a rhyme for curmudgeon...
Comment is about Peake to perform Shelley's Peterloo poem in Manchester (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Given the physical time constraints of working 9-5 , and that schools operate between 9-3, and that most after-hours classes stop at 5, what would you consider possible, John? Lunchtime? When should one eat, then? Or do the shopping?
Comment is about Poems by heart help develop 'cultural ear', says Heaney (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
This is a great poem. I love the line 'guitar feedback flocks birds into our chests'. I suspect I might be a synaesthete. Days of the week have colours (Sunday is yellow; Tuesday a definite blue) and music conjures up shapes - although perhaps I just spent too much time watching Fantasia as a kid! Anyway, thanks for sharing. X
Comment is about Synaesthetes night out at Cafe Oto (blog)
Original item by pauline sewards
I don't think you need to be distracted either by flies in the ointment or by any bees in bonnets to accept that Best of Manchester Poets is an enduring success. I'd like also to take the opportunity to congratulate John Keane and all the members of Stockport Write Out Loud for their anthology, as previously reported in our news columns http://www.writeoutloud.net/public/blogentry.php?blogentryid=34998
Comment is about The best of Manchester: poetry heaven at the Eighth Day cafe (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
i like that the voice in this is from an innocent place awakening/sleeping, 'just the sparkly darkness...' lovely image.
like the blonde way of her hair..nice title 'blonde' in the darkness... always thought the way women sleep on their mans chests' beautiful. its a beautiful act, to be beheld as here with love..ah real romance.
Comment is about Blonde Memory (blog)
Original item by Kealan Coady
Pleased you enjoyed "Don't Think Twice..." and the piccy of my taut bottom.
Comment is about Yvonne Brunton (poet profile)
Original item by Yvonne Brunton
<Deleted User> (6315)
Fri 5th Apr 2013 00:07
<Deleted User> (6315)
Fri 5th Apr 2013 00:05
Oh well...that poo-blemished made me wonder though...then I thought maybe it was a figure of speech?..like Poo! it's blemished ??
If it is the other...you can keep em!!
And I like the sentiment..
Comment is about The Supermarket Veg Approach to Romance (blog)
Original item by Dave Bradley
<Deleted User> (8730)
Thu 4th Apr 2013 23:46
very romantic and thought provoking. I particularly like the references to the seasons
Comment is about LOVE NEVER DIES (blog)
Original item by BRIAN EVANS
<Deleted User> (8730)
Thu 4th Apr 2013 23:44
the rhyming structure is very good
Comment is about LOVE IS BORN (blog)
Original item by BRIAN EVANS
tony sheridan
Thu 4th Apr 2013 23:36
I can relate to this. Well done. Take care, Tony.
Comment is about The Cocoon (blog)
Original item by Ushiku Crisafulli
tony sheridan
Thu 4th Apr 2013 23:29
Like it! Nice one! Take care, Tony.
Comment is about What do you do with a drunk in GAY bar? - NaPoWriMo Day 3 (blog)
Original item by Ushiku Crisafulli
Hello Dave,
Thanks for your thoughts on "Don't Think Twice..".
You are quite right about cultural differences to body shapes and I myself have no room to talk!
Comment is about Dave Bradley (poet profile)
Original item by Dave Bradley
What ho, Harry!
Glad you liked "Don't Think Twice...". I shall indeed do the gentlemanly thing and confess that it was my own bottom!
Comment is about Harry O`N eill (poet profile)
Original item by Harry O`N eill
Hello Izzy,
Sorry you didn't like "Don't Think Twice..". I didn't intend it to be offensive (well, no more so than my other offerings that are in poor taste!).
I myself was rather pleased with it, mainly in a technical sense for engineering the structure and tight rhyming pattern.
I think Bob Dylan must have agreed with you because he changed all my words!
Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)
Original item by Isobel
I'm curious. What's the difference between a
woman "having some fun with men's genitalia"
(sic) -
and a man having fun with female cellulite?
Laugh and the world laughs with you...or something!
Comment is about Don't Look Twice - It's Cellulite (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Hi Mike.
My malaise was only a short one. One that persists to this day though, I still can't bear silence, or should I say my head to be full of silence, so full there is no room for sound, thought, nothing. We are as alike as we are different, your head full, mine devoid. I empathise my friend but realise from your piece, I have the better deal.
Thank you for your supportive words and thank you for sharing your story.
Cheers
Pete The Bus Driving Poet.
Comment is about On Listening (blog)
Original item by Noetic-fret!
Hi Pete, I enjoyed reading this so much so that it prompted me to write my own piece on listening. I have placed it in poetry blogs in case you would like a gander.
Really like this, sometimes i wish for the peace you write of, but there, you will have to read my short short to understand why.
Keep posting,
Best wishes,
Mike
Comment is about LISTEN!! (blog)
Original item by Pete Slater
It's always possible to offer something. It doesn't have to be time. (as it happens i'm just about to finish 13 consecutive shifts). It' a choice.
Comment is about Poems by heart help develop 'cultural ear', says Heaney (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
'naughty naughty' as opposed to 'haughty haughty'
Tommy
Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)
Original item by Laura Taylor
it is one i like very much thank you Jules for a beautiful comment B
Comment is about NOSTALGIA (blog)
Original item by BRIAN EVANS
thank you jules yes they both work together the picture and my poem
Comment is about BENEATH THE TREES OF LILAC (blog)
Original item by BRIAN EVANS
Rachel Bond
Fri 5th Apr 2013 22:01
hey thanks stef..thought no one in world was going to read it ;) i think its one of best things ive ever written! so thanks cool is cool enough for me x
Comment is about go to the woods (relist) (blog)
Original item by Rachel Bond