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Thu 28th Mar 2013 23:24

Very much enjoyed!.. :)

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Thu 28th Mar 2013 23:22

Shame on you Ian!! tskk...even old bangers have feelings yer know! :) Thanks for the lovely reply to Second-Hand Love x appreciated..

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Thu 28th Mar 2013 23:21

Bout a car innit?..For the Comp.. Inanimate Object lol..think if I had added furry dice in there it would have been easier to understand?..Pleased you enjoyed nevertheless :) x

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Francine

Thu 28th Mar 2013 22:25

I have to agree with everyone, and I cannot add anything to what has already been said... And yes, thank you Winston for posting the link to Freda's fabulous poem!

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John Coopey

Thu 28th Mar 2013 22:09

I really have no issue with immigrants coming here to get work - you don't see our numpties showing the initiative to go abroad to find it! But it's become an issue "of which we dare not speak" without being branded a flog-'em-and-send-'em-back reactionary or a pinko-leftie-tree-hugger. We really need to reclaim the ground for informed and responsible debate.
On another front, there was a programme on the telly some little while ago which examined the DNA of a number of white english residents (including a prominent National Front/EDL figure) to find that all of them had a minority proportion of indigenous "english" DNA, as indeed do most of us.

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John Coopey

Thu 28th Mar 2013 21:55

...answers on a postcard, please...

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John Coopey

Thu 28th Mar 2013 21:47

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Harry O'Neill

Thu 28th Mar 2013 21:26

M.C. AND john,
Last year, a quarter of the babies born in Britain were born to mothers who were themselves born abroad, (which makes
one wonder what proportion of the rest were born to british citizen mothers who`s own parents were born abroad) Someone recently
complained that the new immigrants and their children knew a lot more about British history than lots of the British kids (and I believe him) The cosmopolitanisation of the British population is taking place under our own noses and we`re only just waking up.

Thank God for the momarchy (even - perish the thought - Charles) but we need some more rallying points for Britishness to oppose all
those multi-cultural wimps.

The Americans tried reading an oath of allegiance in schools, but it fell foul of the atheisist versus God schools.




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M.C. Newberry

Thu 28th Mar 2013 20:51

How delightful that this win should be so timely, and for such a memorable evocation of a long-ago time and experience.
Well done!

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 28th Mar 2013 20:26

To learn a poem by heart is to show it proper love and respect. It also provides the learner with mental exercise that is to be welcomed...especially during later years..and a treasury of the like that is beyond
value. The practice is also perfect for learning songs.
Encouraged by a video on Youtube of the old music hall song "Burlington Bertie From Bow", I decided to commit the whole thing (and it's quite long!) to memory. I now enjoy reciting it to myself in bed...a rather effective way of "counting sheep" for this lyricist, who has even taken up the challenge of "updating" some of the lines for fun in the process. But much still stands on merit
and I love the lines (set at Kempton Park racecourse)
"I lean on some awning while Lord Derby's yawning,
Then he bids two thousand and I bid good morning..."

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 28th Mar 2013 20:16

JC - is the following hope for the new Europe?
My great niece Carly from California had a
paternal grandfather who was a young 2nd Lieut.
with a US Armored(Yankee spelling!) Brigade and was wounded at St Loos France on June 9th
1944 (D-Day plus 3). Showing his spirit, she
set off on her own to teach in Albania (of all
places) when she was barely out of university.
She met and married an Albanian guy and they
now have two children - living initially in the
USA and now shortly due to live for a few years
in Albania to be near HIS family. Interesting
that it was HER actions that caused HIM to
go back with her to the US and eventually claim
citizenship after appropriate residence. A
good example of the old can-do "explorer"
blood crossing boundaries where the reverse
would probably barely have featured...even now...unless there was something (or someone) worth the journey perhaps. But usually, it's
money not love that is the big incentive for
many in what are still basically "tribal" lands with customs to match. This country
exercised colonialism but it was probably because it was ready to chance its arm when
others would not. In short, if it hadn't been
GB then that might have encouraged worse from
elsewhere - to leave worse behind upon eventual departure. All things end and it's the legacy that has to submit to the judgement
of posterity.

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John Coopey

Thu 28th Mar 2013 19:17

It is exasperating to hear so many take for granted the freedoms we enjoy. We are where we are because of a historic trail which led us here. This includes the the contribution to our national psyche and heritage of two World Wars.
John O'Farrell (Labour candidate in the Eastleigh by-election) asks in "An Utterly Impartial History of Britain" if, on balance, British colonialism was a force for good or bad, and sides with Good - if only for the fact that it positioned Britain in the vanguard of Allies (along with the contribution of the Commonwealth and Colonies) fighting fascist Germany - what he describes as colonial Britain's finest hour.
If anyone should take for granted our democracy and underestimate its fragility they should look to the example of "civilised" Yugoslavia. Democracy is worth defending.

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tony sheridan

Thu 28th Mar 2013 17:12

Hi Tracey!! Only just found your page. As Jeff said.........about time!! Will read your work soon. Looking forward to seeing you read at the cadence!! Take care, Tony.

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Harry O'Neill

Thu 28th Mar 2013 16:44


Don`t know how I missed this one - marvellous!

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Nigel Astell

Thu 28th Mar 2013 15:42

Put me down for five copies please John

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Dave Bradley

Thu 28th Mar 2013 13:28

This wonderful poem has just been mentioned on a discussion thread about poems relating to childhood. I missed it first time round and am glad to have been re-directed to it. Winston says on the thread that it is one of the best he's ever seen posted on WOL, and I can but agree.

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Cathy

Thu 28th Mar 2013 11:42

Thanks Harry. A great moment when a rhyme came and prevented an argument escalating.

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tony sheridan

Thu 28th Mar 2013 01:34

Love this! Nice one! See you later mate. Take care, Tony.

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Martin Bailey

Wed 27th Mar 2013 21:24

Fortunately not anymore, since we now have gas fires. But being a Bolton lad I thought it sounded better than the predictable old London fog...

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 27th Mar 2013 20:56

Harry - "the family of Man" is reflected in the
domestic version found across so many lands.
Is it really acceptable that those who would
readily castigate these small islands for past
colonialism now seek to introduce their own version of it by sheer weight of numbers - and
in a very short time span albeit that they have
their own countries in need of care and advancement? What have they been doing all this time that they are still so eager to come
here instead? I am confused and bemused at their choice, and deeply concerned about the
ramifications for future social well-being and national identity.
P.S. At my London GP's surgery on Monday, I
was asked my ethnic ID - and replied "English".
I later noted that it was shown as "White British"!
Cheers.

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Wed 27th Mar 2013 20:41

I think you have caught the feeling well, especially like the way you set the scene..does Bolton have smog then?

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Ian Whiteley

Wed 27th Mar 2013 16:42

Harry
I'm grateful, as always, for your kind and supportive comments on 'forget me not' - thanks for taking the time to read it and comment - much appreciated
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Wed 27th Mar 2013 16:37

Cathy
so pleased that you liked 'forget me not' - many thanks for your kind and supportive comments
cheers
Ian

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Harry O'Neill

Wed 27th Mar 2013 16:05


Ian,
The second two stanzas afford plenty of
`free-range` mind room.

Thank goodness with `fair` clues.

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Harry O'Neill

Wed 27th Mar 2013 15:59


Neat apropos `nothing in particular` piece

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Harry O'Neill

Wed 27th Mar 2013 15:42

M.C.
Your poem `refers` to the European version of the world-wide movement of people from where the poverty is to where the jobs and the rewards are.

As this influx seems to be happening mainly in those prosperous lands with aging populations(who need the numbers for economic balance purposes) I sometimes wonder that if the pill, and other (forever cheapening) methods of birth control take significant hold in the `jobless lands` that we might suffer a universal dearth of any people...for economic reasons - or any other.

Sounds crazy, doesn`t it...but?...but?

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Harry O'Neill

Wed 27th Mar 2013 14:27


Tom,
As guy who`s son once had to patiently
explain to him the Bing Crosby`s `you`re getting to be a habit with me` was really about drugs, can I say that you`ve got me thinking.

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Cathy

Wed 27th Mar 2013 13:07

Very moving and inspirational x

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Andy N

Wed 27th Mar 2013 12:39

good to hear from you, Joe.. i will keep an eye on your pages for good rants! lol

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Andy Ainsworth

Wed 27th Mar 2013 10:22

Thanks for the welcome Ann, and the advice. Yes, I've just realised that previous entries seem to drop off as a new one is posted. I shall regulate my blogs!

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Andy Ainsworth

Wed 27th Mar 2013 09:57

Thanks Ann. I often write in the 5-7-5 format of Haiku just to gather my thoughts and observations and set them out neatly. I find this really helps in providing ideas for other writing and structuring some of my poems.

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 27th Mar 2013 09:55

Hi Andy - welcome to WOL. I like your poems. Maybe space them out a bit timewise when you blog them as only the last poem is obvious to people skimming through the blogs.

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 27th Mar 2013 09:53

I really like the elegant poetic image here - nice and uncluttered. Has a Japanese feel to it, for me, for some reason.

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 27th Mar 2013 09:51

I like this - a precious time seeing someone (perhaps someone you love) sleeping. I can identify with the tower of books - there's always a tower by my bed! Unless it's colapsed in a heap!

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dorinda macdowell

Wed 27th Mar 2013 09:00

Whatever that means, John, thanks! - D.

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Tommy Carroll

Wed 27th Mar 2013 00:35

she COMES from there.

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John F Keane

Tue 26th Mar 2013 16:18

Dorinda, your ICT skills are improving by pixels and mice!

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Laura Taylor

Tue 26th Mar 2013 15:29

Aye will do mate, if I ever get to finishing it ;)

And yeh, read your epic ;D

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Lynn Dye

Tue 26th Mar 2013 14:51

I really enjoyed this, Tony, well done.
Thanks also for your comments on "Snowy Window" x

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Lynn Dye

Tue 26th Mar 2013 14:25

Hi Margaret, thank you for commenting on "Snowy Window", glad you like it.
I really like your "Sense of Love -Hurry Home", excellent rhythm which works really well. x

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tony sheridan

Tue 26th Mar 2013 11:41

Poor bloke! lol. Nice one Lynn! Take care, Tony.

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Tue 26th Mar 2013 10:29

very well written Ian.The title,image and poem
fit together nicely(for want of a better word)x

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Tue 26th Mar 2013 10:25

oh you cruel funny woman Lynn!x

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Katy Megan Hughes

Tue 26th Mar 2013 10:16

Mad March hare indeed....

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Katy Megan Hughes

Tue 26th Mar 2013 10:14

Thanks for you comment! I was very excited at the time but then it all turned into a romantic tragedy : ) (sigh!)

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dorinda macdowell

Tue 26th Mar 2013 06:39

Thanks, John - but I ordered a copy a few days ago - Dorinda.

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John Coopey

Mon 25th Mar 2013 21:50

What ho, MC.
Glad you liked Paint it beige.
Yes, I think I got a spelling wrong in'gauge'.

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Mon 25th Mar 2013 21:46

Really enjoyed this clever word play Tommy..aye..

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Chris Co

Mon 25th Mar 2013 19:38

Ohh Laura, chuck us a pointer when you've written the poem you mentioned so I can have a gander -

Best

Chris

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Chris Co

Mon 25th Mar 2013 19:36

Thx for reading and feedback on my latest Harry - appreciated.

Left a long windy comment on the blog hehe

Best

Chris

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