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Tom Doolan

Fri 13th Sep 2024 16:39

Awesome Autumn 😊

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 13th Sep 2024 16:37

The history of events in Leningrad is a salutary lesson of what
horror can be unleashed in war, yet in itself a "sideshow" - a
dreadful outcome of aggression being confronted and resisted.
We, the generational people of these islands, have our own
history down the centuries and have been open to the need to
offer help to others along the way - within our capability to do
so. War without limitations is deadly dangerous and so is the
aggressive abuse that can arise and seek dominance in peacetime. Avoiding both is the ultimate essential good sense. But it seems that conflict for one
reason or another is a regular disease in the tale of human existence and survival.

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Ghazala lari

Fri 13th Sep 2024 16:34

There isn't any, that's why it's not mentioned here, Graham.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 13th Sep 2024 16:23

A welcome upbeat message - thank you.

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David RL Moore

Fri 13th Sep 2024 16:15

Bearing in mind Courtney was not the healthiest of partners for Kurt, probably best to withdraw the offer.

David

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Tim Higbee

Fri 13th Sep 2024 14:57

There is a true eloquence to how you create your imagery with words. Very nice, Clare.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 13th Sep 2024 14:51

A fine poem, Rasa. The imagery surrounding the bridge brings home how much you must have been affected by this. Take care of yourself and keep fighting.

Comment is about The Bridge (blog)

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Tim Higbee

Fri 13th Sep 2024 14:43

The imagery and vulnerability of honesty in looking at life represents a reality that most of us must deal with. We are more in common than we are different, it just doesn't always feel like it. Good poem, Kaitlyn.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 13th Sep 2024 14:38

Thank you, Trevor. Yes, war is an awful zero-sum game, with ordinary people used as expendible pawns

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Tim Higbee

Fri 13th Sep 2024 14:28

The allure of the girls that had that groovy vibe seemed almost magical. Good memories.

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SUVENDRA C DASGUPTA

Fri 13th Sep 2024 14:24

@Graham Sherwood @Tim Higbee Thank you very much for your kind words of appreciation! My regards! 🙏

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Tim Higbee

Fri 13th Sep 2024 14:02

I like how you've expressed that if you are only seeing a barren tree, then there is so much you are not seeing. Great poem.

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Tim Higbee

Fri 13th Sep 2024 13:50

I will wear a colorful dress,
I will mix up myself with the leaves,
Love how you merged yourself with nature to not just admire but totally experience it. Lovely poem Larisa

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Trevor Alexander

Fri 13th Sep 2024 13:16

...and the morning's throbbing head could be earned either from beer or rolling pin, but stoically denied in the interests of domestic harmony. 😉

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Trevor Alexander

Fri 13th Sep 2024 13:10

A sad indictment of our race, indeed. Wikipedia lists 21 current ongoing armed conflicts that have caused 1000 or more deaths in this or last year! And the even sadder fact is that, as you describe, the front-line troops often have no animosity to their opposition - they just point weapons as they are directed.

A genuinely thought-provoking piece Stephen.

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Trevor Alexander

Fri 13th Sep 2024 12:49

As one of those pensioners, I can echo these sentiments! And although I am fortunate in that it probably won't affect me too badly, I know a number that will indeed suffer.

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Trevor Alexander

Fri 13th Sep 2024 12:46

Nicely stated.

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Trevor Alexander

Fri 13th Sep 2024 12:44

We can mourn the (to many!) lost art of 'dancing in the now'. Alas, my knees won't stand up to it either, but the steps still echo in my head.

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Trevor Alexander

Fri 13th Sep 2024 12:33

Masterpiece indeed! With some beautiful phrases like the "water coloured wish"

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Fri 13th Sep 2024 11:57

Thank you so much, Graham!

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Fri 13th Sep 2024 11:52

Very nice! I enjoyed reading it.

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 13th Sep 2024 11:49

This is a really good poem Suvendra V2 and V3 particularly!

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 13th Sep 2024 11:47

Love the autumn (I was an October baby) It never fails to draw inspiration from our wonderful WOL poets!!

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 13th Sep 2024 11:45

Anyone who can manage to get the word benison into a poem is alright by me!
V2 is rather lovely

well done

G

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Fri 13th Sep 2024 11:14

Thank you, Steve.
I remember the falser than faux outrage when I was accused of "politicising" the Grenfell tragedy in a poem shortly after the incident...the type of which I am personally intimate with, though thankfully, to a lesser traumatic degree.

Oh the irony! Cameron, the man who wanted one hundred standards and building regulations slashed and burned in order to BOOST housebuilding for God's sake!

What was all that about Britain needing to find its "moral compass"?...it's still there, at the bottom of the festering septic tank which British politics has become.

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Rick Varden

Fri 13th Sep 2024 10:26

That was the plan Uileam!

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 13th Sep 2024 09:44

Are these words of advice and guidance taken from a specific text? I cannot find any reference/acknowledgement if so?

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Fri 13th Sep 2024 09:41

I haven’t personally been affected by such a situation in my employment, Rasa.
I was alluding to a case in which a “senior” (in rank, and thus, one would have thought conscientious) female member of staff is alleged to have made complaints about several male colleagues, accusing them of not doing their jobs correctly. She was subsequently “blacked”...and by coincidence? the building in which they worked has recently been demolished.
I should add that from the very moment this case was first reported on, I had a gut feeling there was something extremely dodgy about the whole thing…the rest, as they say, is history.

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John Coopey

Fri 13th Sep 2024 09:37

Multum in Parvo, Stephen, as they say in Rutland.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 13th Sep 2024 09:21

Thanks, Mike. A proper political poem. It reminds me of the 'icy blast of competition' from the Thatcher days, most of which seemed to whistle through the living rooms of pensioners.

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David RL Moore

Fri 13th Sep 2024 07:29

Thanks for your comments Stephen and to those who liked.

David RL Moore

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Tom Doolan

Thu 12th Sep 2024 23:02

Many thanks for likes:Aisha, Stephen W & Hélène 👍

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 12th Sep 2024 23:01

Thanks for the likes, Tom, Aisha & Manish. Always appreciated 🌷

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Clare

Thu 12th Sep 2024 23:00

🤗. Thanks Stephen! I am wondering why a talent such as yourself hasn’t joined my poetry group yet. ☺️

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 12th Sep 2024 23:00

Succinct, with a slap in the face. 👏

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 12th Sep 2024 22:52

How to paint with words. Lovely stuff, Clare

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 12th Sep 2024 22:50

I like this Sarah. It has a comforting poetic calm about it 😊

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 12th Sep 2024 22:45

Exactly what I see in the mirror, David! Great poem, as usual

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Rasa Kabaila

Thu 12th Sep 2024 20:05

You read so beautifully Uilleam. Such a wonderful accent and speaking voice-you have- and you speak about such raw and important things. Thank you for doing this.

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Rasa Kabaila

Thu 12th Sep 2024 20:02

Thanks for your comments Uilleam, I appreciate them. I'm guessing you have found yourself in some similar situations?

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David RL Moore

Thu 12th Sep 2024 14:21

Thank you to Clive and Aisha for the early likes on this one.

David RL Moore

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John Coopey

Thu 12th Sep 2024 12:01

Thankyou, Uilleam and David. And Stephen for the Like.
It’s reckoned over 1.5m Russians died in the siege of Leningrad, most from starvation. Cannibalism was commonplace.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 12th Sep 2024 11:22

Truth is, Mike, they have thought it through, and frankly my dear, they don't give a damn.

I would find it hilarious (were the circumstances not so potentially tragic) that the current shower in power are being described as "socialists" by those hysterically grieveing the passing of the Tories, who have inflicted a greater amount of damage on British society by other means.

Anything resembling Democratic Socialism has been well and truly purged from what passes for a "Labour" party, at the behest of foreign agents.

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David RL Moore

Thu 12th Sep 2024 10:51

Hi John,

The horror that lies behind the words you have written opens a vast chasm which is painful to peer into.

Your reading is excellent. It is challenging to read such words in a fitting way. Pace, breathing and tone are important factors which lend to integrity. I struggle with reading my scribbles aloud so appreciate when I hear people get it right.

For anyone who might be interested in the repetitive and often hypocritical nature of war and judgements thereof, there is an excellent documentary series on BBC 4 (iplayer) called "The Corridors of Power". Although it focusses heavily on US foreign policy in recent history it highlights international intransigence and our own culpability in the suffering of millions.

https://www.bbc.co.uk/programmes/m0020xmq/episodes/guide

I found it fascinating, especially accounts of conflicts I had been involved in. Seeing our stupidity from a distance is revelatory, although I know many of those involved saw much stupidity at the time. It's a shame that politicians don't have their offices moved to the front lines in such times. It might change their understanding of their actions and decisions.

Excellent short poem John, straight to the point!

David RL Moore

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 12th Sep 2024 09:58

I've expressed myself badly John...no offence intended.

I should have primarily referred to those who are currently hate-mongering, and promoting such ideologies; it's happening right under our noses as we speak.
There's clearly a hierarchy of racism in British politics which is allowing those horrors to repeat themselves...we close our eyes to it at our peril.

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HÊlène

Thu 12th Sep 2024 09:45

Wonderful poem, Michael. I like the rhythm and the intriguing content. Read it several times.

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John Coopey

Thu 12th Sep 2024 09:34

What would have been your alternative, Uilleam? To allow Nazism to roll unopposed across Europe?

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 12th Sep 2024 08:51

Very touching, Kate.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 12th Sep 2024 08:33

"We WON’T tolerate bullying in the health force" they say.

In the UK, if you're a woman, don't report your boss / es for not doing their job, or you might find youself in gaol on trumped up charges...allegedly.

Comment is about The Bridge (blog)

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 12th Sep 2024 08:25

Thanks John.
Those who hypocritically and self-righteously indulge in "manufacturing consent for war" should reflect on the horrors you describe.

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