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David RL Moore

Thu 12th Sep 2024 10:51

Hi John,

The horror that lies behind the words you have written opens a vast chasm which is painful to peer into.

Your reading is excellent. It is challenging to read such words in a fitting way. Pace, breathing and tone are important factors which lend to integrity. I struggle with reading my scribbles aloud so appreciate when I hear people get it right.

For anyone who might be interested in the repetitive and often hypocritical nature of war and judgements thereof, there is an excellent documentary series on BBC 4 (iplayer) called "The Corridors of Power". Although it focusses heavily on US foreign policy in recent history it highlights international intransigence and our own culpability in the suffering of millions.

https://www.bbc.co.uk/programmes/m0020xmq/episodes/guide

I found it fascinating, especially accounts of conflicts I had been involved in. Seeing our stupidity from a distance is revelatory, although I know many of those involved saw much stupidity at the time. It's a shame that politicians don't have their offices moved to the front lines in such times. It might change their understanding of their actions and decisions.

Excellent short poem John, straight to the point!

David RL Moore

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 12th Sep 2024 09:58

I've expressed myself badly John...no offence intended.

I should have primarily referred to those who are currently hate-mongering, and promoting such ideologies; it's happening right under our noses as we speak.
There's clearly a hierarchy of racism in British politics which is allowing those horrors to repeat themselves...we close our eyes to it at our peril.

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Hélène

Thu 12th Sep 2024 09:45

Wonderful poem, Michael. I like the rhythm and the intriguing content. Read it several times.

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John Coopey

Thu 12th Sep 2024 09:34

What would have been your alternative, Uilleam? To allow Nazism to roll unopposed across Europe?

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 12th Sep 2024 08:51

Very touching, Kate.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 12th Sep 2024 08:33

"We WON’T tolerate bullying in the health force" they say.

In the UK, if you're a woman, don't report your boss / es for not doing their job, or you might find youself in gaol on trumped up charges...allegedly.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 12th Sep 2024 08:25

Thanks John.
Those who hypocritically and self-righteously indulge in "manufacturing consent for war" should reflect on the horrors you describe.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 12th Sep 2024 08:23

Thank you, Graham and M.C. Yes, I think 'futile' is the word, Graham. A fascinating story about your granddaughter - let us pray that her generation will have more sense. I believe that they will.
War usually comes about because strongman leaders think they can get away with it, and ordinary people on both sides pay the price. Its important to say that the responsibility for death and destruction lies with those who started the war, not with the country which is forced to fight back and defend itself.

And thanks to Manish, Rick, Nigel, Aisha, Hélène, Steve, Tom, Stephen A and Holden for liking this.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 12th Sep 2024 08:01

Hello Lynn, no I don't live there...but I've been there on holiday twice.
I'm as "Engl-ish" as they come, (whatever that means?) but like many folk in certain parts of England, I'm of "Iri-sh" Catholic background...and I'm trying to teach myself Irish...let's just say it's a "work in progress".😊

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lynn hahn

Thu 12th Sep 2024 00:40

Hello Uilleam
Thanks for the reading my poem!
Such a good Irish name! Do you live there?

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 11th Sep 2024 23:00

Bullying...a lot of it about...some very subtle....even when you think you're amongst friends.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 11th Sep 2024 22:55

Thanks Hélène,
Dance then wherever you may be...I'll give it a go, but my knees!😊

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 11th Sep 2024 22:46

There's no such thing as someone who's perfect, mouse.💐

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 11th Sep 2024 22:42

You got me there Rick, right to the end!

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Wed 11th Sep 2024 22:40

Thanks Lynn; there's a lot of them around at the moment!

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Tom Doolan

Wed 11th Sep 2024 17:31

Rachel Reeves claimed £4,400 in energy bills expenses before cutting Winter Fuel Payments
The Chancellor is under fire over claims of hypocrisy as her own expenses history comes to light.
By Christian Calgie, Senior Political Correspondent

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Tom Doolan

Wed 11th Sep 2024 17:15

Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment. We are here and it is now.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 11th Sep 2024 16:42

War has always been a feature of humanity's existence, more's the pity. It can be argued that there are "necessary wars" and
that better things come from them. The tragedy lies in the
ongoing variety of reasons for their start, often clashes of
individual interpretations about "rights" and land-grabbing envy,
not forgetting religious dogma, creating the aggression that
follows the desire to succeed in dominating others. And so it
goes on. As the song asks: When will we ever learn?

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 11th Sep 2024 16:31

Probably one of the worst uncaring political measures of any era.
And just look who voted it through. The largesse spread
elsewhere only exacerbates the dismissive contempt in evidence.
Society that treats its old folk and its animals badly is the home of malevolent minds that have no place in our lives.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 11th Sep 2024 16:22

I keep in mind the all-embracing words from the late lamented
Irish comic/raconteur Dave Allen: May your god go with you. 😇

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Manish Singh Rajput

Wed 11th Sep 2024 14:28

Thank you very much, Stephen! I almost thought it went unnoticed.

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Keletso

Wed 11th Sep 2024 10:08

Thank you!

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 11th Sep 2024 09:03

Very poignant Stephen. My 10-years old granddaughter came home from school absolutely astounded that in WW1 on Christmas Day the opposing sides played football and swapped cigarettes before resuming hostilities the next day!!!
Your poem reminded me how futile all this bloody mess has become.

Bravo as always my friend

G

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John Coopey

Wed 11th Sep 2024 08:08

“Multum in Parvo”, Graham.

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Steve White

Wed 11th Sep 2024 07:45

Thanks Stephen.

His appearance at the Grenfell Tower Inquiry dripped with arrogance. He made it very clear that he had more important things to do than be there and showed so little regard for the bereaved, survivors and residents that he couldn't even remember how many people had died.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 11th Sep 2024 06:17

I don't know why, but I love the concept of a 'mediocre bench', Manish.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 11th Sep 2024 05:51

I think you've summed him up, Steve. He was MP for my parents' constituency of Brentwood and managed to send a 'personal' letter to my dad two years after he had passed away.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 11th Sep 2024 05:43

Ah, the temptations of nostalgia, John. Best to steer clear now, as you say.
Well penned as usual.

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Arrianna

Wed 11th Sep 2024 03:36

This is a really nice poem 🙂 I like It

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Arrianna

Wed 11th Sep 2024 03:23

👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾 that last line speaks volumes

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Holden Moncrieff

Tue 10th Sep 2024 19:56

Thank you so much, Manish, I'm truly grateful for your kind comment! 😊

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Tom Doolan

Tue 10th Sep 2024 18:27

Many thanks Arrianna for your lovely comment. 🙂

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Manish Singh Rajput

Tue 10th Sep 2024 14:56

Thank you very much Graham and Tim for your kind comments, it means a lot to me.😊

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Manish Singh Rajput

Tue 10th Sep 2024 14:31

I agree with Graham, brilliantly done!

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Arrianna

Tue 10th Sep 2024 13:36

Loving poem 💕

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Holden Moncrieff

Tue 10th Sep 2024 13:33

Thank you so much, Graham, your encouragement means a lot! 😊

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David RL Moore

Tue 10th Sep 2024 07:56

Hi John,

Excellent poem.

"Between my finger and my thumb the squat pen rests, 'I'll dig with it'

And so you do.

David RL Moore

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 10th Sep 2024 07:25

Very cleverly put together H
Good words!

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 9th Sep 2024 22:52

A like for sheer audacity (and bravery)! Well done.

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Rick Varden

Mon 9th Sep 2024 22:22

Thank you so much MCN

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Tom Doolan

Mon 9th Sep 2024 22:06

A very emotive piece.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 9th Sep 2024 19:31

Ah...got it! Thanks.
MC

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John Marks

Mon 9th Sep 2024 19:02

Thank you Holden and Clare!

"Being Irish, he had an abiding sense of tragedy, which sustained him through temporary periods of joy."


William Butler Yeats

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Clare

Mon 9th Sep 2024 18:44

Good to see you still writing. Brilliant, as always.

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Luke

Mon 9th Sep 2024 18:23

Live and let live.

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Luke

Mon 9th Sep 2024 18:21

I suppose my view being brought up in the UK the spiders here pose less "threatening" behaviour. Still all creatures deserve a chance at survival which is the very nature of their "threatening" behaviour.

Thank you for reading another one 😊

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 9th Sep 2024 17:42

A smile from some wit -
We all need more of IT
(Keep them coming).

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 9th Sep 2024 17:37

Spiders are part of the chain of numerous earthly existences
and have their place. They help keep the balance of a healthy natural world. It is only when they become immediately
"threatening" that there is a reason to see removal/disposal.
A glass tumbler and a piece of stiff cardboard are useful aids
to the safe performance of this action.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 9th Sep 2024 17:29

Thanks, Rick. Look out for the coming "Winter Trees" - also
short (certainly shorter than the season it describes)! 😉

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Clare

Mon 9th Sep 2024 17:22

Thank you so much for the feedback Tom Doolan, Tim Higbee. I really appreciate it. 🙏🏻

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