Thanks for your kind comment on my work, Trevor.
Keep writing. Steve
Comment is about trevor homer (poet profile)
Original item by trevor homer
Perhaps I just don't possess the skill to imagine anything better than the words you've chosen. So, I hope you don't trim or change a single word of this, but I am not sure if you should listen to me.
I thought it was perfect as it is.
Comment is about Murmuration (blog)
Original item by Tom
Since he seems to have a natural uppercut he might do well at boxing?
Comment is about Bob was a cut above his fellow pupils at his new school (blog)
Original item by hugh
Thank you New Shoes for your comment in response to this poem, I appreciate the wisdom and generosity of your words.
Thank you Hope Ray for your comment and support.
Thanks also to everyone who has clicked 'Like' for this poem.
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Comment is about Pieces (blog)
Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari
That is such a beautiful poem that you left on my profile.
Thank you so much ?
Comment is about d.knape (poet profile)
Original item by d.knape
I like the idea of higher and lower energies
Comment is about CONTINUITY (blog)
Original item by Sarah Louise mcnee
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Tue 19th Jan 2021 14:39
<Deleted User> (28781)
Tue 19th Jan 2021 14:37
Missing pieces. ?
Well thought.?
Comment is about Pieces (blog)
Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari
Astro Girl
Tue 19th Jan 2021 13:36
dunno why but this hit me deep , its lovely ?
Comment is about Hospital Gown (blog)
Original item by d.knape
Astro Girl
Tue 19th Jan 2021 13:10
Julie, Stephen A., Aisha, JD., Aviva, Kristian, New shoes and Brian.
Thank you all for your likes and comments. They are much appreciated and a source of encouragement.
Keith
Comment is about An ill Wind Blows (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Thanks for looking in Mark. That sounds really interesting. That whole area has changed so much. The only area I visited in the 70s was Rotherhithe and Horsleydown, due to my father's antecedents being from there. Fascinating to look back now!
Ray
Comment is about Trains, trolleybuses, rag and bone men: Ray Pool publishes online book of archive photographs (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
I think you called it Keith. I felt every emotion in that poem. And it brought me back to my final break that took several months to pass and at the end I was liberated from my past and free to move on.
Thanks for sharing Jordyn
Peace
Comment is about Consider Me Gone (blog)
Original item by Jordyn Elizabeth
I see where you are coming from Keith and the Truth behind your words. It will be a heavy blow indeed, only in that thought we must remember not to fear.
Comment is about An ill Wind Blows (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
See yourself, and see to love yourself
Comment is about Untitled (blog)
Original item by Lori Nalewajk
Great story! reminded me of my old days of pulling treasure from the trash.
Comment is about a pair of old cowboy boots (blog)
Original item by Clyde McCulley
To every lesson truth may be seen. To every fault we must rise above. our loss, the remembrance of love upon our mortal soul. The universe draws to you the frequency you hold in mind. to build your new temple in line with that of your birth, we must build a foundation of truth and love. And there you will stand in the living gift of the light.
Comment is about Pieces (blog)
Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari
Tue 19th Jan 2021 04:19
A written poem
the heart may stir
its beauty in
a few kind words
A Poem is just
a thought transferred
the beauty is
that it occurred.
Comment is about Aviva Rifka Bhandari (poet profile)
Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari
JD.,
Could I apply for a model on trial to see the results for myself. Is there an attachment to save the dirty words for possible inclusion at a later date? Perhaps the censor can be bypassed.
A novel idea well presented.
Thank you for this
Keith
Comment is about The Acme Corp. poem making machine (blog)
Original item by J.D. Bardo
So - I have "form"? In the quest for full and coolly considered
findings, perhaps. I reject and revile the tainted tendency towards
"trial by media" that feeds off preconceived prejudices and populist
posing. As for Keith's stats. in 2019,over 50 weeks, 38 US police
were shot dead on duty, a slightly lower figure that the 47 that
suffered a similar fate in 2018. In short, any call there to reported
criminal behaviour is to be taken very seriously indeed in a society
full of guns and unstable individuals who don't do as they're asked
and thus liable to respond in deadly fashion. My original comment
made a plea for proper procedural processes to be followed to a comprehensively considered verdict. I do not shrink from demanding that this happen whatever the pressure from various "interests" and their adherents. ? Otherwise, just who is
safe from those who convict and condemn without exhaustive legal process to conclusion? You? Me? Anyone?
Comment is about WHO KILLED GEORGE FLOYD? (blog)
Original item by trevor homer
This sounds an appealing project from someone who appears to be
an exact contemporary of mine. I have a number of books of photos
from my old stamping ground in the docklands of 1960's East End of
London and this collection looks likely to be a suitable companion.
Comment is about Trains, trolleybuses, rag and bone men: Ray Pool publishes online book of archive photographs (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
I Try to use the dirty words Aviva, But the machine censors me !
Comment is about The Acme Corp. poem making machine (blog)
Original item by J.D. Bardo
Perhaps an upgraded model will spit out two poems, one containing all the accepted words, and the other containing all the removed words.
Comment is about The Acme Corp. poem making machine (blog)
Original item by J.D. Bardo
Thank you Jordyn, I'm delighted that you think so and I hope that my future posts can live up to that too. Thanks for your comment.
Comment is about Here Until Then (blog)
Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari
A poetic drive into your future.
Comment is about Consider Me Gone (blog)
Original item by Jordyn Elizabeth
Into your work your feelings seep;
Your writings are talented and deep.
A healing passage of creation,
Which will heal your situation.
Well done !
Comment is about Tortured Soul (blog)
Original item by curiousdud3
Looking forward to reading your writes as and when you find the words you are searching for. Happy new year to you too.
Comment is about Tortured Soul (blog)
Original item by curiousdud3
@julie callaghan; I have been struggling to get things written down and finished over recent months. Got quite a few half finished pieces but the words don't come to finish. I think I write from emotions too because the more my head gets twisted the easier the words come. I need to find away to channel poetry through positive thoughts rather from the negative mind. Happy New Year by the way and thank for taking the time to read my poems.....it means a lot ❤️
Comment is about Tortured Soul (blog)
Original item by curiousdud3
Thank you Kristian and Stephen and also Cathy and Keith for your unstinting support. And Aisha, dear Aisha, I nearly forgot your generosity - mea culpa, mea maxima culpa. And Aviva, yes, I chose the song to work with the poem. Both carry a message for the less-deceived reader, echoed in the words of Dante (born c.1265, Florence — died September 13/14, 1321). That great Italian poet, advised us thus:
“Do not be afraid; our fate
Cannot be taken from us; it is a gift.”
― Dante Alighieri, Inferno
This view, espoused by Dante, harks back to the central belief of Christians, that God took human form and allowed himself to be crucified at Golgotha. In the ninth hour of Christ's agony his words, recorded in both the new testament gospels and the old testament psalms, :"Eloi Eloi lama sabachthani?" "My God, my God, why hast thou forsaken me?" have echoed down the centuries. Few listen in this barbarous age as the Christians of the East cry out for help.
Comment is about Summer snow (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
Brian,
Yes, they have reduced the price of crumpets in my local supermarket.
Keith
Comment is about An ill Wind Blows (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
You write so beautifully, I look forward to reading more of your work ?
-J
Comment is about Here Until Then (blog)
Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari
Thank you Philipos and Stephen for commenting.
Also, thanks to everyone for all the Likes for this poem/song.
Stephen I may often dare to inflict my writing style upon the world but I am not nearly as confident to sing at anyone. I haven't got that great a voice and not enough vocal control either, I'm definitely not up to the task of performing this one, at least not with the imaginary tune that it currently has.
Comment is about Here Until Then (blog)
Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari
<Deleted User> (18980)
Mon 18th Jan 2021 19:02
Shades of Revelations Keith...just need the four horsemen.
Anything to be optimistic about?
Comment is about An ill Wind Blows (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Hopefully to be consigned to the annals of time very soon.
Nice reflective piece, Julie ?
Comment is about A Picture Of Mixed Emotions (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
the last line says so much in itself- really enjoyed this piece, Keith.
Comment is about An ill Wind Blows (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
I'm just waiting for you to add your singing voice to this one Aviva... ?
Comment is about Here Until Then (blog)
Original item by Aviva Rifka Bhandari
An excellent, Powerful piece Keith, but let's hope it remains but the stuff of poems...✌️
Comment is about An ill Wind Blows (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
John,
You have successfully incorporated the tenuous and unpredictability of life in this poem. As always very well crafted.
Thank you for this
Keith
Comment is about Summer snow (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
Poignant disillusionment and fragility of life and sense of eternity.
I'm not certain if that's what the poet intends but I am certain that its a very subtle and meaningful poem. I also really loved the audio track which happens to be a completely different song but mesmerising and beautifully sung. I'm wondering if it was intended and adds an additional dimension of loss, or just occurred by accident.
Comment is about Summer snow (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
Another beautiful poem John. I especially like the verse, "a waxing moon lingers in the sky as centuries float by." It makes me think life is poetic despite the atrocities. ❤
Comment is about Summer snow (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
The morning news already had me scared, and depressed today. then, a friend remarked that he has not lived in a more dangerous and uncertain world as now. then this...... Off to the Home improvement center for stronger door locks, and plywood to board up my windows. Keith, you have me scared out of my mind. For us, Inauguration Day, may be very unkind. I expect the worse, Our future is really in a bind. I pray for a better day, and have hope that tomorrow that is what we find.
Comment is about An ill Wind Blows (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Peace and happiness to all who have enjoyed (or not), this poem. Thank-you for the likes and comments, I love the attention the poems, "and I" get. thanks again. JD.
Comment is about Flash your Sign (blog)
Original item by J.D. Bardo
Keep a few words up your sleeve
Keep a few words close to your heart
Borrow a few words from a poem
Use kind words if you know them.
Comment is about Hard Scrabble (blog)
Original item by d.knape
Julie,
A well timed poem which all should read. The accompanying photo is also very appropriate.
Thank you for this
Keith
Comment is about A Picture Of Mixed Emotions (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
Thanks for the like Stephen A
Comment is about The Wheel Of Lockdown (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
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Mon 18th Jan 2021 09:19
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Stephen Gospage
Tue 19th Jan 2021 17:20
Very evocative. I haven't had the pleasure to visit yet, but now hope I can do so when things are back to normal. I remember Ken Dodd singing Nessun Dorma at the age of 80. Will never forget it.
Comment is about The Best Place Ever! (blog)
Original item by Mike Bartram