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Randy Horton

Thu 26th Nov 2020 18:38

Thanks for the comment, MC, and, of course, the winners write the history.

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John Coopey

Thu 26th Nov 2020 18:12

I think I would have guessed that you would only be able to score 2 out of 3, Julie.
And thanks for the Like, Hope.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 26th Nov 2020 18:08

ARB - in a sense, you are right, of course. It's me losing patience
with the frequency of those who seem perpetually inward-looking
but not keeping it to themselves. Perhaps believing that misery
loves company.
?

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julie callaghan

Thu 26th Nov 2020 17:45

The old ones are the best?

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julie callaghan

Thu 26th Nov 2020 17:43

Well.... I remember the nit nurse and the dotty colours?

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julie callaghan

Thu 26th Nov 2020 17:38

Thanks for the likes Hugh, Dean, Greg and Paul, Thank you for the comment Paul. I allow myself to plan and prepare for Christmas before December but music, films and decorations are not definitely not allowed until the 1st at the earliest.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Thu 26th Nov 2020 16:34

It seems like a very "me-me" poem

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John Coopey

Thu 26th Nov 2020 16:16

MC and Paul - In truth, the actions of the nob nurse were as unerotic as was possible. So much so that The Little Corporal invariably shrank in fear to the size of an acorn.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 26th Nov 2020 15:06

What is the point of this research into "connections" to the slave
trade? Does it cover that egregious era in the widest possible
context that spreads far beyond the trans-Atlantic trade and involves
numerous other nations throughout history? Perhaps the subject for a poem under the circumstances reported above.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 26th Nov 2020 14:55

Much obliged for the comments and the "likes".

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 26th Nov 2020 14:51

To the victors, the spoils.
An axiom throughout history. The onus is on the victors to make the world a better place: sadly, not always in evidence.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 26th Nov 2020 14:44

My word - how you johnnie-come-lately types (no reference in the above context inferred!) were spoiled by all that attention. We war
babies never had it so good! All those trips to the village shop with
our ration books during our kid years, with stern parents/step-parents
from an Edwardian era keeping us in check. No ball cupping for us by
matronly strangers. You never had it so good!!!!
Or - as Private Eye misquoted Harold MacMillan: You never had it? So good!

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raypool

Thu 26th Nov 2020 12:23

Thanks Keith. I remember your bobbin affair as well! It's so important to get children's skills up and running at an early age. Luckily I had woodwork at a later school and still remember cutting of joints and assembling frames etc. You need hands as Max Bygraves used to say.

Greg, that sounds like it might be in your attic , nothing for it but to let curiosity take over (plus torch). I'm a terrible hoarder of my own history.

Thanks for liking, Trevor, New Shoes and Stephen.

Ray

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Randy Horton

Thu 26th Nov 2020 11:31

Thank you very much, John.

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<Deleted User> (23732)

Thu 26th Nov 2020 10:06

Love this. Thanks for sharing ?

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<Deleted User> (23732)

Thu 26th Nov 2020 09:58

Amazing, well written

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John Coopey

Thu 26th Nov 2020 09:58

Enchanting, David. I like the idea of developing the saying.

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John Coopey

Thu 26th Nov 2020 09:54

I don’t want it.
Here’s a sobering thought: Research shows a man my age (albeit not a superman like me) is 90 times more likely to die of it than a 30 year-old. My in-laws are 630 times more likely to die.
I don’t want it.

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<Deleted User> (23732)

Thu 26th Nov 2020 09:52

Simply a beautiful piece of poetry ?

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julie callaghan

Thu 26th Nov 2020 09:51

Thanks for the likes Brian and Stephen.
Thanks for the lovely comment Brian?

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<Deleted User> (23732)

Thu 26th Nov 2020 09:49

Thank you so much for your kind words on my poem, very much appreciated ?

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John Coopey

Thu 26th Nov 2020 09:49

Not so, MC! We need much more self-indulgent navel-gazing on this site.

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John Coopey

Thu 26th Nov 2020 09:44

Wonderfully understated, Randy.

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John Coopey

Thu 26th Nov 2020 09:40

The daemons in your head can come out at night. I have a box I try to put them in. But they don’t always stay in there.

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John Coopey

Thu 26th Nov 2020 09:33

Brilliant stuff, Branwell.

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Zushka B

Thu 26th Nov 2020 06:24

Beautiful

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d.knape

Thu 26th Nov 2020 00:58

good point M.C.
good point!

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Wed 25th Nov 2020 23:15

Bloody cheapskate!

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Wed 25th Nov 2020 23:12

Get it?
Got it?
Keep it to yourself

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Wed 25th Nov 2020 23:07

That Arabella sounds like the sort of posh bird who wouldn't have been impressed with anything less than a Porsche. You're better off out of it Branwell.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 25th Nov 2020 21:29

Good point. Good poem.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 25th Nov 2020 21:18

Brilliant second verse.

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Wed 25th Nov 2020 20:20

Thanks Paul and Keith. Grateful for your support as always. This piece is the result of me talking to a nasty virus that is trying to attack me. Disease and malignant love has to be determined to stick around writers because we out them every time! Stay well.

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Emeka Collins

Wed 25th Nov 2020 19:54

Yeah, the worst kind of partnership.

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d.knape

Wed 25th Nov 2020 18:45

My poetry requires
medication
both the writer
composing it
and..the reader
reading it!
?

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d.knape

Wed 25th Nov 2020 18:43

I don't usually read poets or poetry.
I'm just different that way.
But I read this and was impressed.

Each time he climbed another mountain peak,
He took a slice home as a souvenir;
Nothing too big, just a vanishing scrape.
One day, on cue, he heard the mountain speak,
And through dawn’s modest light, it shed a tear
At such a violation of its shape.
This act would likely finish his career.

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d.knape

Wed 25th Nov 2020 18:40

Thanks Charley Bishop-
are you Catholic?
Do you have a Mitre?
?

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keith jeffries

Wed 25th Nov 2020 18:29

JD.,

This poem epitomises the dilema of attributing our misfortune due to our wrongdoings and the judgement of God. Yet it also acknowledges the need of God. Self examination and hope are the themes which the reader will see as evident. A conversation with God, one which we often do in a special intimacy as a means of seeking God out and searching for explanations and reassurance.

a well crafted poem

Thank you for this

Keith

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julie callaghan

Wed 25th Nov 2020 18:08

Enjoyed this clever write.

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John Coopey

Wed 25th Nov 2020 18:05

I have nothing but the greatest of respect for those previous generations, MC.
And thanks for the Like, Trevor.

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julie callaghan

Wed 25th Nov 2020 18:01

I get it

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keith jeffries

Wed 25th Nov 2020 17:54

Vautaw.

A brilliant diatribe with an unambiguous message. I love every word. Say it loud and clear girl.

Thank you for this
Keith

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julie callaghan

Wed 25th Nov 2020 17:52

Thanks for the likes MC, JD, Hugh and Stephen. Thanks also for the comment Greg, added a photo, it has been green most of the year but just started to turn red again?

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Greg Freeman

Wed 25th Nov 2020 17:21

Well done for recycling your poinsettia, Julie, something I've never managed. Although in recent years it's become a subject of minor seasonal discord in the Freeman household ... I've gone right off the red ones.

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Greg Freeman

Wed 25th Nov 2020 17:17

Very nicely done, Ian. I think you've caught a mood ... a lot of people seem very apprehensive about Christmas this year.

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Hugh

Wed 25th Nov 2020 16:49

Jane said

"Not with her you stupid man,
Do it with me if you still can."

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A Christ

Wed 25th Nov 2020 16:48

To Bloom

Sometimes
Life is like the smallest flower
Stretching for some sun
When all the bigger ones devour
All it could become

I loved this!

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 25th Nov 2020 16:37

A clever poetic fable. Superb

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 25th Nov 2020 15:19

There is a sardonic tone here that would surely have been known
and understood in other days - a way of coping with what they were
experiencing. Is there such a thing as too much freedom? From
some behaviour seen at present it seems a pertinent question!.
Surely, with freedom comes the need for self-discipline...and that's
not a quality we see much of nowadays.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 25th Nov 2020 14:56

How true. I recall it being said that "Experience is the total sum of our mistakes". The pity is that there are always those who do not
learn from that simple truth.

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