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kimberly

Tue 24th Nov 2020 04:04

Good to hear you’ve completed your treatments and in good spirits writing. Cheers.

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Nigel Astell

Tue 24th Nov 2020 01:24

Thanks for your likes
Paul
Stephen
Nicola
and Charlotte.

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Nigel Astell

Tue 24th Nov 2020 01:19

This will be a Christmas when good times are shared and have much more meaning than any of us have shared before.

Thanks Paul

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Mon 23rd Nov 2020 23:15

Xxxx just for you, grown on my farm. Keep on shining.

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John Coopey

Mon 23rd Nov 2020 21:46

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John Coopey

Mon 23rd Nov 2020 21:29

Perversely, Stephen, I've always taken immense enjoyment from breaking the mould.

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raypool

Mon 23rd Nov 2020 21:23

I think the mere fact of thinking in poetical terms puts us outside the vast majority Stephen, and engenders a sense of comradeship although I suppose the same feelings could accompany other groups, most of which are mainly conventional however. I rest my case. Carry on regardless..

Ray

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keith jeffries

Mon 23rd Nov 2020 21:20

Stephen,

A poem of enquiry about conformity which invariably robs people of their identity. Over many years of conformity I have become a fierce opponent of this philosophy. The individual is more important than the collective. To oppose conformity is to express freedom of thought.

A thoughtful poem and thank you for it

Keith

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julie callaghan

Mon 23rd Nov 2020 19:59

Thanks for the like too Paul. ?

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Greg Freeman

Mon 23rd Nov 2020 19:34

Have forwarded your query, Oz.

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julie callaghan

Mon 23rd Nov 2020 19:27

Thanks for the comments Paul and Keith. Thanks also for the likes Keith and both Stephens.

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John Coopey

Mon 23rd Nov 2020 19:04

You’re welcome, Paul.
Be careful with the CD, though. Make sure you are alone when you listen to it. The baritone delivery a la Richard Burton might otherwise raise long forgotten stirrings in your missus!

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Mark McCray

Mon 23rd Nov 2020 18:22

Thanks, Philipos!

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 23rd Nov 2020 17:54

Thanks for the thoughtful comments, Rose and Paul, and to others for the likes.

I'm still not sure where this is set, and I wrote it! New York, Khartoum?
Of course, he may not be a tourist. Work in progress, as is life.

Time for a lie down......

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Oz Hardwick

Mon 23rd Nov 2020 16:00

Hi. I was just about to order a copy & got to the point at which it mentioned author discount codes. Have these been sent out?

Cheers
Oz

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John Coopey

Mon 23rd Nov 2020 14:05

MC - When you read Andrew Marr’s “History of Modern Britain” you realise how close we were in 1940 to “doing a deal” ie surrendering. Of an inner war cabinet of 5, Chamberlain and Halifax were in favour, Churchill. Attlee and Greenwood against.

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keith jeffries

Mon 23rd Nov 2020 13:15

Julie,
I do hope the government has determination.
Thanks for this
Keith

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 23rd Nov 2020 12:49

Droll indeed. Keep adding your glow to this site.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 23rd Nov 2020 12:45

An interesting look back at steam loco history. The Brits and Fritz
have always been closely aligned in the brilliance of their inventions,
especially those that "go anywhere"! No wonder der Fuhrer was
not so keen on attacking the UK when there was a possibility of a
deal in his mind. Just sink of ze might of der duo ven vurking as vun!
Ve vud haf bin der rulers, nicht problemz - Brits and Fritz. Achtung
alles in ordnung...(then Adolf wakes up).

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Philipos

Mon 23rd Nov 2020 12:18


Well worded piece to print out and hang up on the wall.

Enjoyed.

P

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Steve Higgins

Mon 23rd Nov 2020 11:12

Thanks Rose !

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Ghazala lari

Mon 23rd Nov 2020 06:40

Welcome Siddiq Sir,

I'm glad you joined us on this platform. Many can benefit from the knowledge that Allah has blessed upon you. Eagerly looking forward to read your enlightening words, inspirational couplets and poems.

Feel free to write in Urdu and Persian. We can translate it on our screen. And for many of your write ups I can do the translation.

Regards.

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Andy N

Sun 22nd Nov 2020 22:16

Thanks Keith;

Doing this is a way of us winding down after sometimes quite a hard writing workshop, also the booz has usually kicked in by then too lol.

Sometimes these go a bit daft, this one was just a pleasure doing (:

Glad you liked it.

Thanks also to Nigel Astell, Martin Elder, Paul Sayers, Dawn for the love and support. Means loads

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keith jeffries

Sun 22nd Nov 2020 20:21

A masterpiece of self examination. Well crafted and rhymed to drive home the point. This is poetry from the heart and mind. It is clear and unambiguous which is to its overall merit.

Thank you for this

Keith

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John Coopey

Sun 22nd Nov 2020 20:18

Ah, yes. Platform tickets. I think they were time-bound, probably 1 Hour. More adventurous was sneaking round the sheds to “cab” a few. Got chased by the railway bobbies a few times.

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New Shoes

Sun 22nd Nov 2020 19:33

The basic laws that keep us from harm's way
To live another day
Must be seen and felt to turn over faith
when you believe all that you have seen
only after asking the question

The baseline of truth is that we are all resonating
we can relinquish our fears through understanding
where true knowledge is power without control
To see the light at the end of the tunnel is to understand how the energy flows

Question all and judge nothing, then begin to bare witness to the ground you walk on

Then see your right to belong

So don't get hooked by looking for your answers in a book

Anything that is written is first in mind
so construct your temple of thought through your heart
then be defined

No need for white robes and glory
You are living your our story

when you believe you can never reach the end of the rainbow
see that the rainbow is you!

then raise up others so that they can see too.



Thanks for the Poem sir. Paul

Peace

Willow

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Mike McPeek

Sun 22nd Nov 2020 19:26

d.knape - LOL, luv it!

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John Coopey

Sun 22nd Nov 2020 18:39

Ssshhh, Brian. You’ll have in front of the modulators again.
It’s a thought, Stephen. Perhaps she saw the Dwight D Eisenhower whistle by once and thought “I’m having one of those named after me.
I was indeed an anorak, Paul. Those were the days when you could hop on a train to London as an 11-year old to do some spotting with a couple of mates . Times have changed.

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julie callaghan

Sun 22nd Nov 2020 18:37

Thank you Stephen, had a lovely day, cheers

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 22nd Nov 2020 17:48

Thank you Keith! A wonderful, encouraging comment!

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 22nd Nov 2020 17:47

Happy birthday Julie. Hope it's been as good as it could be! ?

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Sun 22nd Nov 2020 17:24

Good one Steve!









Rose ?

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Sun 22nd Nov 2020 17:12

Another of your very unusual story-rides Stephen and I enjoyed every centimetre of the distance,







Rose ?

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julie callaghan

Sun 22nd Nov 2020 17:10

Thank you for the comments and likes. Managed to dodge the rain and back in time to admire the rainbow ?

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 22nd Nov 2020 17:02

I hope it isn't! Thanks for the poem.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 22nd Nov 2020 16:48

Best wishes, Julie

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Mike McPeek

Sun 22nd Nov 2020 16:45

Thanks Paul! A rumination on friendship, our differences and the often fickle nature of both.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 22nd Nov 2020 16:42

Grantham. Think about it, maybe Margaret Thatcher was a trainspotter and recorded the Mallard's number as it went past. I think we should be told......

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Sun 22nd Nov 2020 16:34

Always good to smile
when you're walking a measured mile
from Charing Cross to The City
and if they don't like it...tough titty!

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Sun 22nd Nov 2020 16:23

I vould like to mek ze objection to ze anti-Deutsch sentiment in zis poem.

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keith jeffries

Sun 22nd Nov 2020 15:58

Stephen,

This is poetry at its best. Fabulously descriptive. Well crafted and certainly to be read again and again.

Thank you for this

Keith

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 22nd Nov 2020 14:48

The thrill of new, the disappointment of normal (whatever that is) The addiction to life. Don't regret.

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Ghazala lari

Sun 22nd Nov 2020 14:47

I agree with Graham's views on this poem. I second his thought.
Realistic write?

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 22nd Nov 2020 14:42

There's a feeling of manipulation buried in a shallow grave here. Being a pawn comes to mind too. A disassociation, a disconnect. A very interesting viewpoint of involvement and also being outside looking in.

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Jason Bayliss

Sun 22nd Nov 2020 12:31

My pleasure Keith, I started a while back on Instagram doing a little series called, "Sunday morning thoughts," this was one of those.

J. x

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raypool

Sun 22nd Nov 2020 12:03

Thanks for reading Julie. It was more like a way of life I remember - something for everybody. Poundland can't hold a candle to it IMO. I even remember when they had gas globes on the ceilings. Giving my age away, I wish somebody would take it!

Gratitude for the likes Stephen G and Stephen A Trevor Paul and John.

Regards, Ray

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 22nd Nov 2020 11:47

Thanks to Stephen, Paul and Dawn for the generous comments. I have to confess that it's been some time since I was in Primrose Hill (a bit more recently than 1842) but the place still has a mysterious quality about it, at least in my imagination.

So glad that people enjoyed it.

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d.knape

Sun 22nd Nov 2020 11:41

Mike McPeek
writes and tweets
his poetry
deserves a peak.


Is there a McPeek Burger place in your town?
Chicken McPeeks?
what a cool name!

Twin McPeeks?

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keith jeffries

Sun 22nd Nov 2020 11:00

Excellent poem with sound advice.
Thank your for this
Keith

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Alexandra Parapadakis

Sun 22nd Nov 2020 10:20

Thank you!

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