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M.C. Newberry

Fri 11th Oct 2019 16:29

London has long been a focal point for demonstrations of all kinds
and I have seen my share in many decades here in this old city.
The present example indicates an unsavoury form of fanaticism
that presumes to know better than the rest of us.
There will always be those ready to join and follow a "cause"
- especially if it is likely to be an attention-grabber for the media.
The comparison with votes for women is somewhat wayward in my own view. That was coming anyway and their actions merely hastened the day. The subject of climate change IS widely known
and discussed across the world with UN levels of concern. What
progress do these ego activists think they are making in the
meantime? To borrow an old line: Methinks they doth protest too much!

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 11th Oct 2019 16:09

Never sit and look at a blank page V. Better look out of the window or read a book, listen to the lyrics of a favourite or new song, anything but a blank page, it'll outstare you every time.

G

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Don Matthews

Fri 11th Oct 2019 15:27

Kate/Jason

Poets write about life. Say no more.....

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Don Matthews

Fri 11th Oct 2019 15:23

Brian

You've read my mind on this. I agree with you 100%

'Overpopulation I would suggest is the main reason for many of the world's current troubles'

But Don we need more people
To make more money, things
(But we'll get more pollution)
(And shit that people bring)

The planet can only support a finite number of people. This factor seems to be missing from any future planet-development plans.....

If I were world-leader I would adopt a one-baby limit (like China did once).

Hooray!! Boo!!.....

Sheesh...I can't win Brian

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Don Matthews

Fri 11th Oct 2019 15:08

You gotta have foresight to be a good entrepreneur John. I'll be sure to send you an invite when the musical comes to town.....?

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John Coopey

Fri 11th Oct 2019 15:05

You’re on to something there, Don. Not sure what.

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Don Matthews

Fri 11th Oct 2019 15:04

I read this first and just 'liked'. Now I think I'll comment. I think they are more interested in media attention than their cause. It doesn't do the cause any good.

And aren't these sorts of demonstrations becoming a bit old hat?....

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Fri 11th Oct 2019 14:58

Don't get me wrong Jason, I loved it anyway. Happy endings all the time are just schmulzy.

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Don Matthews

Fri 11th Oct 2019 14:54

I love the complexity in this. It's not just an overnight, quick tap-of-the-keys job. It took some time and effort.

Take the start/stop at the beginning. I like this technique. Probably what Kate means by good rhythm.

And there's the rhyming. End-line and internal. Nice.

To cap it off the thoughts evolved right down to the finishing line which could end in no other way.

Complex and very well put together. Good work Jason

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Don Matthews

Fri 11th Oct 2019 14:40

You've been reading my thoughts friend....haven't you?

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Don Matthews

Fri 11th Oct 2019 14:20

Ray, I did read this, (cross my heart and hope to die), but when I went to press 'like' it had vanished - 'poof' - I reckon those aliens had snaffled it like they did Nigel's.

Graham, I'm glad you've got this one back from the aliens. I can now press it.

Don't fret Ray, I did really read and like it. If only those aliens......?

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Don Matthews

Fri 11th Oct 2019 14:12

Your situation would never occur here in Australia. We have a modified Westminster system. Democracy for the people. What the people vote for in a referendum must be carried out. No ifs or buts. The Supreme Court, acting for the people, can veto any action of Parliament.

UK would do well to adopt our system.....

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Trevor Alexander

Fri 11th Oct 2019 13:37

A difficult time indeed. It's weird situation, where (if the memes I read are right?!) the country at large voted to leave in the referendum, but the MPs largely voted remain. Can you see where the logjam might arise?..

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 11th Oct 2019 13:32

Haha! it needed a few reads Ray but you have painted a wonderfully dark and suspect picture of old mother London. I used to drink in the Docketts pub right on the water at Blackfriars. It took me back.

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Trevor Alexander

Fri 11th Oct 2019 13:27

So true. And yet many of us are loth to give that feedback ourselves - I know I'm guilty of that!

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Hugh

Fri 11th Oct 2019 13:21

Breaking news 4 people stabbed at the Arnadale centre in Manchester .Daughter just rang checking that I was safe .Police have arrested a 40 year old man.

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Jason Bayliss

Fri 11th Oct 2019 13:14

I know, but sometimes the ending has to be sad even though, quite honestly, I prefer a happy ending too. Thanks Kate.

J. x

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Fri 11th Oct 2019 13:12

Love the rhythm on this one. Pity about the sad ending. ?

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Fri 11th Oct 2019 13:07

Wise words.

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Fri 11th Oct 2019 13:03

This poem isn't worthless because it's introduced us to a new word, which of course we will now use frequently. ?

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Fri 11th Oct 2019 12:57

Love it. Made me laugh.

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Fri 11th Oct 2019 12:49

A truly British dilemma . The government wanted us to vote but only the way that they wanted. Then we didn't vote that way and they resigned or entered into a sulk for three years. Now they would like to do something but it's always raining and there's cricket, then tea, . . you know . . .

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Fri 11th Oct 2019 12:33

very evocative Marantha. ?

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raypool

Fri 11th Oct 2019 12:04

Thanks for liking this Graham. Now I know someone read it!

Ray

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Hugh

Fri 11th Oct 2019 12:04

Boris is taking us to the brink,
Time for another referendum me think.
We were misled to vote for leave,
The true facts were omitted to deceive.
A remain vote in favour would this time win,
70 to 30 to stay in.
The last vote was such a close call,
Just seen the new result in my crystal ball !!


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d.knape

Fri 11th Oct 2019 11:26

just between
you and me
thanks for your comment
dabble on!

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keith jeffries

Fri 11th Oct 2019 11:06

Don,

Thank you for your perspective from Down Under. "So what´s the solution?" Well, it has already been solved. In 2016 the British People in a referendum voted to leave the European Union. Democracy must be respected whether we like it or not.

Keith

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raypool

Fri 11th Oct 2019 11:00

Sorry to bang on but an injustice has been done. David is not a sycophant nor petty minded. A renegade, maverick, romantic certainly. In case nobody noticed, with a virulent sense of humour too. A staunch friend, implacable enemy, ex soldier, a mirror on the real world, traits that people might find hard to deal with. Why wouldnt he be cast out?

Ray

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Randy Horton

Fri 11th Oct 2019 10:53

Thanks, Michael and Don.

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Don Matthews

Fri 11th Oct 2019 09:27

MC

Gotta song idea for you to work on

Cockwork ranga bang bang bang
Ranga cockwork one, two, three
Bother! Wrong, there's just two girls
Cockwork ranga please do me

Last line sung by two backing singer ranga girls

You should be able to get ranga grunts, oohs, aahs from online Ranga Sound Library. Surely?

Then approach for movie deal. Throw in a few baby rangas for kiddies. Family fun. Last line may need fine-tuning. Disney?

Then comes the musical. Your name in lights. Would not advise seeking advice from JC. He can't tell a he ranga from a she ranga.

I'll be your agent. Small percentage of royalties.

Wadayathink?.....?

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Don Matthews

Fri 11th Oct 2019 08:50

The Brits they say shite
While we Aussies say shit
It's you Lynn that's prompted
Me saying above, it

I will give you one thing
Like you, we say fart
We're both on the same page
We're both full of heart

(Good to hear from you stranger.....) ?

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Don Matthews

Fri 11th Oct 2019 06:14

I dunno how to Brexit Trev
We don't do it down here
It sounds bit catastrophic
(Drink up, let's have a beer....)

Sheesh Trev it does sound like
A crazy dazey dance
Can you learn it online?
(Is it done in pants?....)

(Gimme a break Trev. I gotta rhyme it with something.....) ?



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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Fri 11th Oct 2019 04:19

Excellent visual writing Chris. Made me feel like I was there.

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Fri 11th Oct 2019 04:17

Beautiful poem Chris. Thank you for sharing. ❤

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Fri 11th Oct 2019 03:54

Thanks so much for reading and your feedback Tom, Keith, and Fred. I love moments of awareness that poets capture and share.

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Michael Triandam

Fri 11th Oct 2019 02:50

I didn't see that ending coming.... but loved the way it knocked me out. Thank-you

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Trevor Alexander

Fri 11th Oct 2019 01:03

We need a bit of light relief from the dross! I've been known to dabble myself. Nice one dk.

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Trevor Alexander

Fri 11th Oct 2019 00:59

Anyone else fed up with the whole saga yet? With mucho apologies to Lewis Carroll.

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Ruth O'Reilly

Fri 11th Oct 2019 00:21

Many Thanks for stopping by to read & like some of my poems. I appreciate that. I enjoyed your poem Shouting! Look forward to reading more of your work.

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John Coopey

Fri 11th Oct 2019 00:05

Got back home to look this up, Kev. Masterful story telling. And the delivery tonight was superb.

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John Coopey

Fri 11th Oct 2019 00:02

Every one of us is hypocritical on this issue. From the nay sayers to the Extinction Rebellion protesters (of which I count myself a supporter). We all of us rely and suckle at society's infrastructure of power, heat and light. We all rely on modern transport and communication. We all require feeding etc etc etc. But that does not mean that we should not try to limit or even reduce our reliance on some aspects of these things.
I sit squarely ( from my armchair) with the protesters.

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Tom

Thu 10th Oct 2019 23:35

I miss David's contribution vividly. And Devon's. And elPintor and Robert Mann. Four of my most admired WOL poets gone, right there. I wish there was a path back here for all of them... but I have no solutions.

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keith jeffries

Thu 10th Oct 2019 23:26

Emily Pankhurst chained herself to the railings of the Palace and women got the vote, but on the other hand I agree with you that the disruption taking place now affects not only people´s livelihoods but life itself when people are being rushed to hospital. Governments need to wake up, this one in particular.

Thanks. Very provocative. Good poem
Keith

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Don Matthews

Thu 10th Oct 2019 23:04

Now that's a different direction your mind is taking MC......?

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Don Matthews

Thu 10th Oct 2019 22:59

Ruthy

'Nigel needs last line'
For complete haiku

Seems I need to go back to Haiku College here ?

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raypool

Thu 10th Oct 2019 22:43

Brian, there is no glory in posting on this site, nor is there disgrace. I'm sure the banning of a poet is not based on any moral perspective. Poetry of all shapes and sizes and depth belong here. Any other considerations such as winning a mediocre battle to retain that privilege can't surely have our blessing, nor should those who have gone be castigated in retrospect in the name of "truth." Or have we really sunk that low? I wonder.

Ray

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Philip Stevens

Thu 10th Oct 2019 22:38

Oops

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Ruth O'Reilly

Thu 10th Oct 2019 22:07

Good Advice there Hugh, and easily digestible in a good rhyme.

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Philipos

Thu 10th Oct 2019 22:01

And sometimes frogs end up as bookmarks when they get squashed flat. And cats like playing leap frog with them as well. That's when Quasimodi rings the bells - and plaintively he yells for Esmerelda. Thanks for your comments Ruth, always good to share a laugh. P.

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Hugh

Thu 10th Oct 2019 21:59

Wrote my contribution to world mental health day two hours before it closes.What do you think?

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