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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 5th Oct 2019 11:54

M.C., I do know that 'blessing'.

Apparently, I have 'Nordic' blood as well, which, in combination with the Celtic Irish, is quite a heritage for considering the 'esoteric' themes of life. There has to be some explanation for this unrelenting drive.

Ruth, how wonderful. My first thought was: 'Well, that accounts for the bright face leaping right off the screen. Irish eyes and a winning smile!'

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Ruth O'Reilly

Sat 5th Oct 2019 11:52

Thanks for reading Keith, glad you liked this. Hugh, Don, Adam, Branwell and Michael for the 'likes'.

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Ruth O'Reilly

Sat 5th Oct 2019 11:48

The ultimate in the art of zen Don.
All the best ideas start by focusing on that blank screen in your mind. Ironically it can take hours of meditation to free that mental chatter and get a blank screen. Uri Geller's top tip in becoming psychic...Focus on your blank screen. So we can expect some predictions from you soon.

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Ghazala Lari

Sat 5th Oct 2019 11:25

Black n white
Colours spilled
Book of art
Craziness instill

Haiku expert!!

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keith jeffries

Sat 5th Oct 2019 11:23

d.k.,

We are kindred spirits. Look after your typewriter and cherish it as it is green friendly. I am a self confessed technophobe who still writes poetry, short stories and letters with a fountain pen. Blotting paper at the ready and an inkwell. I stick stamps on letters and visit the post office. I even send postcards, picture postcards and the postman knows where I live. I too possess a typewriter but seldom use it as it is the forerunner of the computer, a cursed machine. My telephone is black and I also have a whistling kettle. Stay strong in the face of progress. I also keep a diary, a page a day diary, which is not vulnerable to power cuts or spam. You should receive HOTW Hero of the Week award.

I salute you.
Thank you

Keith

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John Coopey

Sat 5th Oct 2019 11:07

Bear up, Don. It won’t be much worse than the stuff on here.

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Ghazala Lari

Sat 5th Oct 2019 10:45

They sound like a movie of todays time. She should have been a script writer born now.
It does rings a gong in the head. Seriously i had always thought her to be a poet unlike your analysis.
Keep fuelling your think tank and keep sharing!!

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Don Matthews

Sat 5th Oct 2019 10:42

Skippy is name for kangaroo on children's programmes boing boing...

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d.knape

Sat 5th Oct 2019 10:34

Waiting for Driver-less cars.
That was a Driver-less poem!

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d.knape

Sat 5th Oct 2019 10:31

what is a "Skippy"?

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d.knape

Sat 5th Oct 2019 10:30

I will write My First Car
as soon as I remember
what it was.
cars had stone wheels back then.
a hard ride but...
no flats.

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d.knape

Sat 5th Oct 2019 10:28

Why are you standing in the water?
in those new sneakers?

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d.knape

Sat 5th Oct 2019 10:23

thanks for reading my poem
I just hope you are not addicted.
if so, seek treatment in
Write Out Loud.
?

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Don Matthews

Sat 5th Oct 2019 09:22

Oh no! You mean it gets worse?.....

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John Coopey

Sat 5th Oct 2019 08:08

Dead Poet’s Society.
There is a special corner of Hell reserved for us, Don. It’s where we are forced to listen to one another’s pretentious shite.

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Don Matthews

Sat 5th Oct 2019 07:33

Here's a haiku (genre fun)
10,000 miles to you
Been sitting in my drive 3 months
'Bout time it to you flew


You will notice I am improving with my haiku studies..........

Thalia is impressed.......

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Don Matthews

Sat 5th Oct 2019 06:07

The poem is entitled 'Oh to write like Emily' .It's hard writing (in rhyme) about a complex poet who wanted all her work destroyed. What attracted me was they were short rhymes, but so puzzling. A challenge you could say. And with titles like 'My life had stood - a loaded gun' and 'I felt a funeral' and 'Because I could not stop death' I couldn't resist her attraction....

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Ghazala Lari

Sat 5th Oct 2019 04:58

The poem seems to have a good start, creates curiosity, something kind of suspense.....m sure there is a thriller coming up..just waiting for the poem.
Hurry!!! Curiosity kills the cat?

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Candice Reineke

Sat 5th Oct 2019 04:16

Wow. Powerful piece, Keith! World history is marked by radicalized people blatantly acting out of sheer evil, in the name of righteousness. And history keeps repeating itself. ?

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Don Matthews

Sat 5th Oct 2019 04:07

Nicely presented Keith. I like the short 4-line 'interuptions' between...

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Candice Reineke

Sat 5th Oct 2019 03:52

Rose, right?! Thanks so much for your kind words! ?

Emilia, thank you for reading and for your caffeinated empathy! Cheers! ☕️

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Michael Triandam

Sat 5th Oct 2019 02:31

I love the way dreams blend elements of the past and we are left to give them meaning. You captured the dream so simply. I admit I would have tried to look for deeper truths if I had not read your comment, but as it was, I just enjoyed the physical experience of your poem. It flows so well.

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Don Matthews

Sat 5th Oct 2019 00:45

I've missed the Grim Reaper so far
Don't think he likes poetry stuff
Too art-farty and how-do-you-do
Too uppity and queue youie fluff

Shit John I can see his shadow creeping up on me....thought I was safe in the poet queue...?

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Don Matthews

Sat 5th Oct 2019 00:35

Ghazala, Do.RoThY

How interesting Ghazala. I like how her work is so tight, yet so complex. I'm also attracted to her use of rhyme. I always need to go to analysis to fully understand.

I am serious when I say I have writ a poem. And yes it did headachey makey me. Will post it sometime. Here's a verse

Every line a puzzle
Waiting to unwind
Taut with strange intensity
Created in her mind.....

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Don Matthews

Sat 5th Oct 2019 00:17

Going once....

Going twice.....

Sold - to Rose....?

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Don Matthews

Sat 5th Oct 2019 00:05

Someone from WOL had a vision
Employed techs with experience (not green)
To figure a way to put poems each day
To be seen by great many on screen

And the viewers were happy...

(Cos they no longer had to watch rubbish on Logie Baird...) ?

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John Coopey

Sat 5th Oct 2019 00:01

Indeed he does snatch some from further back in the queue, MC.
And thanks for the “Like”, Desmond.

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Jason Bayliss

Fri 4th Oct 2019 23:41

Do you know what Ruth, you're right. I'd never even thought of that. The idea was for Halloween. It was a demon whispering poison and doubt into someone's ear.

J. x

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Fri 4th Oct 2019 23:16

I think this is one of those laws that will be very difficult to police and enforce, but I expect support for it will grow amongst new parents in particular and behaviours will change accordingly. And the message will be carried via social media to other parts of the UK and we too will change our behavior, law or no law.

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Fri 4th Oct 2019 22:56

I'm sure he will reappear in another guise.

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Hugh

Fri 4th Oct 2019 22:15

Skint as well

Hugh went to the doctors and was first in the queue,
Asked ,"Do you treat alcoholics?"Yes we treat quite a few."
Hugh said,"Judging by the queue you must make a mint."
"Good after you've seen all these patients get your coat on I'm skint."

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Shirley Smothers

Fri 4th Oct 2019 20:59

Thank you Candice for your comment on my poem THE MONSTER. I am The Monster because ran out of coffee?

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keith jeffries

Fri 4th Oct 2019 20:57

A lament, an invisible eulogy. Was this loss self imposed? " a window on his world bricked up" are words which say a great deal of a wounded soul.

Thank you for this

Keith

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keith jeffries

Fri 4th Oct 2019 20:51

I really enjoyed this.
Thank you

Keith

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Emilia Callahan

Fri 4th Oct 2019 20:32

This says a lot in just a few words. Thanks for sharing ?

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Emilia Callahan

Fri 4th Oct 2019 20:30

I like this one, and I'd love to know what exactly the five dollar words were that changed the narrator's life moving forward.

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Emilia Callahan

Fri 4th Oct 2019 20:26

They say it takes forever to brew the first pot of coffee in the morning. Thanks for sharing!

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Emilia Callahan

Fri 4th Oct 2019 20:25

This is a really great poem. It leaves the reader wondering why he deleted his comment.

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Hugh

Fri 4th Oct 2019 18:34

Yes watched it on parliament live.I was in the middle of doing research for my poem and by coincidence it was on.It was a moving experience listening to her.I have sent the poem by email to her and read it out to members of her staff on the phone.The things we poets do !

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Ruth O'Reilly

Fri 4th Oct 2019 18:13

Rosie Duffield made a very moving speech in parliament 2days ago. It was about her experience of domestic abuse topped with embarrassment as it was going on at the same time as being an MP. Did you see that Hugh?

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 4th Oct 2019 17:31

In my old (now sadly gone) local pub run by two Irish brothers, a sign
above the bar displayed these words that might have been added:
May the road ahead always rise up to meet you.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 4th Oct 2019 17:26

When I work out my years ahead of you,
I'll be happy to look back down that queue
To see the Grim Reaper reach in and nab
Those jostling behind to avoid his grab! ??

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 4th Oct 2019 17:13

Topical and worth reading and commenting.
During decades of public service here in London, I attended my
share of what is now termed "domestic abuse". The causes were
varied and the solutions rarely easy or readily accepted from within
the marriage (I assume this basically refers to marital situations) -
and logical advice was often acknowledged with an outward show of gratitude - but with no follow-up action that might have alleviated the problem. The sad proof of "hope springs eternal"!.
Bullies and aggressors exist in both sexes, their behaviour
rarely examined other that to allocate blame. Don't marriage
counsellors (a fact of life in years past) exist these days? Victims
can also be instigators and treading carefully when dealing with
this volatile scenario is of paramount importance or else we are in
danger of falling back on our own prejudices to form judgements
that merely scratch at the whole often unpalatable truth.
Divorce courts spend hours trying to determine such situations
when they get that far - which says much for the multi--faceted
web of deceit and self-deceit that can be weaved between the "warring factions".
Physical and verbal aggression are
open to proper remedial action but so
often these courses are not adopted and
the results are often all too evident - too
late!

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Ghazala Lari

Fri 4th Oct 2019 17:10

Today i happened to teach A narrow fellow in the grass to my students.

Great write!!?

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 4th Oct 2019 16:53

Now they should sort out their considerable problem with alcohol -
the cause of so much aggression and physical harm there.

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<Deleted User> (9882)

Fri 4th Oct 2019 16:29

has that,

' if you can't say anything nice, then don't say anything at all '
similar ring to it.

well done girl!





Rose ?

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<Deleted User> (9882)

Fri 4th Oct 2019 16:25

very entertaining dude!










Rose ?

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<Deleted User> (9882)

Fri 4th Oct 2019 16:22

Candice, you never said and never will say a truer word/s. Oh! that wonderful liquid kick-start to the day!

Brilliantly written piece.







Rose ?

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Hugh

Fri 4th Oct 2019 16:02

A little bit of flirt

She was slim and smart with plenty of charm,
Chatty and friendly confident and calm.
She'd come to see me to plant a seed,
By the end of the meeting I was her dog on a lead.

She crossed her legs and was a bit of a flirt,
She did it with her eyes and a very short skirt.
She signed me up for my last car,
No swear words or smoke from a cigar.
No footie talk or offer of a drink,
A little bit of flirt was her success I think.

But it wasn't my last car,I put it into reverse,
Crashed into a bus,ended up in a hearse.
I'm up there in heaven happy and proud .
Driving with the angels up in the clouds.

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Nigel Astell

Fri 4th Oct 2019 15:56

Thanks Don

I sometimes make my poems open Ruth so you can put the words to any situation on a personal level

Cheers Lisa balanced it must be!

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