Hi Owen,
Glad you liked the little book (took a while in the post though!) I like writing these Haikus, they have certain advantages but its difficult to get the message accross in so few words. thats the challenge i guess. There is a discussion thread on Haiku in the forum at the moment. Winston
Comment is about owen calvert (poet profile)
Original item by owen calvert
Helen Thomas
Sat 28th Feb 2009 16:54
I liked the line 'echoing locomotion and squealing swings'. I think the last stanza of that poem is especially good.
Comment is about owen calvert (poet profile)
Original item by owen calvert
Hi Owen, Liked the Summerhouse - like the combination of Echoing locomotion and squealing swings but coughing up truth for me was a killer line. keep posting mate. Winston
Comment is about owen calvert (poet profile)
Original item by owen calvert
<Deleted User> (6292)
Tue 3rd Nov 2009 11:17
Hello Owen
Thank you so much for taking the time to comment on my poem i'm pleased that you liked it.
Augusta x
Comment is about owen calvert (poet profile)
Original item by owen calvert