this work reminds of one of a great writer by the name marechera dambudzo.take no offence to be likened to this great man. the way the narrator in the above piece makes us look at the all too familiar images is indeed good. i like this style.we look at these scenes through a participant observer.as marechera says' how can you observe a stone which is about to strike you?' this writing is really organic.the writer is withdrawing from the bank of societal engagements and giving back to society with interest!what am i saying now? this stream of consciousness work is splendid.well done my compatriot.iamges of gweru have been portrayed well.let the rest of the world sit up and listen!

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Tinashe, you are an artist!
Love this writing.
More strength to your arm!

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