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Goth Chick

Tue 22nd Dec 2009 13:58

Ann

Thanks for your comments, I did laugh a little when submitting this piece here. But don't worry; I'm sure insight and thoughtfulness reside here in abundance.

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John Darwin

Tue 22nd Dec 2009 13:50

Hello mystery lady. Thanks for your comments on my miserable tract 'drenched'. You must have been the veiled lady supping bottled lager at that gig in Bury leaning on the champion poker player. You move in mysterious ways.

I like the second verse of Misstaken.

Keep on waxing.

John

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Tue 22nd Dec 2009 11:23

Welcome to WOL looking forward to more material Goth chick. Winston

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 21st Dec 2009 22:07

I hope that you will get plenty of constructive criticism for your work here. Welcome to WOL

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 21st Dec 2009 20:20

Hi Ms Goth! This poem is very complex, I feel, and almost reads like a message from you, hoping to belong on this site! Do write us some more, and welcome! Love coalesce and acquiece!

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