<Deleted User> (9801)
Sun 13th Nov 2011 17:06
Uni-fawn haha you certainly rhymed this, x
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<Deleted User> (9801)
Sun 13th Nov 2011 17:03
I love Requiem for a daisy? and how you didn't rhyme petticoat? very clever, What is smote? x
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<Deleted User> (7075)
Sun 2nd May 2010 11:46
Hi Tim. Well done in your 'come back' to performing. look forward to seeing more of your writing. Hope you enjoy exploring the WOL site. Winston
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Welcome to WOL Tim. Liked your samples and will keep an eye on your work.
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Tim King
Mon 14th Nov 2011 18:01
Hi Alana,
Thanks for your kindnesses... 'smote' is as in the past tense of the (old english?) verb 'to smite'. Technically I think it means 'to hit', but the verse is intentionally overwrought and pretentious so I thought the malapropism appropriate. Enjoyed your profile samples although I haven't read them all yet. Will leave a comment or two when I have. I've not been active on the site for a long while. Time to get back into the swim.
Take care
Tim
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