Jet Set is wonderful.

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HI JULIAN

yes i mean wrapped in the patina.
the other is just a typo.
thanks for your comment!

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Hi Sunshine - a very warm welcome to WOL. Hope you enjoy the site :)

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Hello, Sunshine Faggio

Benvenuti.

It is good to see your work on here. I especially welcome your thought about making poetry part of daily life. And I welcome your ability to write poetry - and such good poetry - in English. Bravo!

Just a little question about the last verse of Jet Set: do you mean 'wrapped in' rather than 'wrapped by'? and should that be 'How it feels good', rather than 'if...' ? This is not criticism, simply wondering. I occasionally translate from French and I find the prepositions the most difficult to get right at times. Thank you for posting. Grazie mille.

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