Jeremy - thanks for the comments and the advice on The Crow. On this occasion I have amended the second half of the line altogether. I also hope you enjoy the additional stanza!
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again Lynn I thank you for your kindness.
I accept your compliment, it means a very great deal to me - namaste or whatever that thing is when you put your hands together and thank you blessings.
and likewise allow me to thank you for expressing it.
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Lynn Hamilton
Thu 2nd Apr 2015 23:15
Jeremy. My comments are not out of kindness, it is the way you, in my humble opiniom, lovingly strum the words and form a tune x
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thank you Lynn and Lea for your kindness.
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Lynn Hamilton
Thu 2nd Apr 2015 13:25
Just been reading through some of your work and I have have to say that I find it beautiful. You are a very talented man. Lynn
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Sat 28th Mar 2015 08:17
Thanks Jeremy for commenting on Only (?) Human, glad you enjoyed it. I am really loving your poems, a little bit in awe actually :)
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thanks for the kind comments regarding 'breathing in the dusk' Jeremy - I'm enjoying your output so far - keep up the good work mate
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Thanks for your kind words on 'Rain/Sun/Rain' Jeremy. I find your sample poem intriguing. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
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Hello Jeremy and welcome to Write Out Loud. I’m really looking forward to reading some of your work. I know that you will be warmly welcomed by fellow WOL-ers on the site. If you haven’t already added a picture to your profile please try and do so. It’s good to see what our fellow poets look like.
Have a good browse around the site, there’s lots going on and if you have the time make some comments about the work of other poets please feel free. It’s the best way to get some constructive feedback about your own work too.
Any problems, please ask. There’s always someone who’ll get back to you. It’s a friendly place, so welcome once again.
Graham Sherwood
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Cynthia Buell Thomas
Wed 13th May 2015 10:37
I will make an effort to follow up on your work already here. I have a few hours to enjoy WOL this week.
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