Sydney, Welcome to WOL. I'm often off line for days. And then have a two-three hour splurge. You have a great attitude that will take you far in writing. Sharing and comparing is a fab way to improve your technique and expand your scope.
'Pilgrim palms' is very good; urges multi-faceted thinking of 'pilgrim'. The connotative power in one word is like a treasure house.
Cynthia
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Sydney Southers
Tue 31st Jan 2017 23:53
Cynthia,
Thank you for your warm welcome to WOL! I had Shakespear in mind when I used the phrase 'pilgrim palms' (from Romeo and Juliet).
-Sydney
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