<Deleted User> (22247)
Fri 5th Jul 2019 17:43
That is brilliant, brilliant, brilliant! "Money-Go-Round," I mean.
Everything about it is delightful. I know it is difficult to write dialect, but yours is smooth and convincing.
Story telling, dialect, rhyme and romping rhythm.
I guess it was OK.
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Welcome from me, too. You have great flair which is only possible with ideas worth sharing. And many of them. 'tittle tattling' is an art in itself, widely practised through all cultures and all ages.
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Hi John. Thanks for commenting on "shut thi Clack" & "Sylvie".
I'm reading and enjoying some of your stuff at present, and I'll leave some comments when I've read more.
Welcome to the site by the way. I hope you get as much out of it as I do. I'm new to writing poetry so it's only by receiving comments that I know how I'm doing. All the best.
Cheers Kevin
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John Andrew Nield
Tue 9th Jul 2019 11:00
Thanks for your lovely comments, Mindy. I do try my best to entertain....? x
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