so lovely poem sample...I shall not be
Tuesday, April 17, 2018
10:32 AM
It was shocking to learn
When you turned
Your back and left forever
My mind was seized with fear
Nights have turned barren
Hell took over the heaven
My heart was shattered
Even I was little afraid
No, I will blame no one
But try to learn
Why did it happen to me?
Even though I was true
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samples... nice one...I fear shadow
Thursday, March 29, 2018
7:58 PM
I fear shadow
And don't allow
It to grow larger
I certainly fear
I bear pain
And remain disturbed
With thoughts
I ought to make it right
As the night approaches
I try to reach
With thoughts covering you
And I follow through
Why can’t I close on?
And find the option
To remain with you
I feel this is true
The key is in your hand
Try to be a real friend
Come to my rescue
And offer love' due
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Big Sal
Thu 29th Mar 2018 03:17
It may help you gain readership to space out the poetry you place on the site, as each successive one replaces the last one before it on the blog entries. Nice, cohesive style you have though, and they all come together so well.
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Cynthia Buell Thomas
Wed 27th Jun 2018 11:07
A brain for science and a heart for words - terrific combo for some brilliant writing.
I'll try to catch up.
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