Yvonne,
Your poem entitled betrayal is a magnificent expression of betrayal and its consequences. I too was a victim and reading this poem brought home to me that the scars always remain.
Thank you for this
Keith

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All the poems you have put out thus far are all strong enough to warrant praise - even from the emotions alone. ?I always enjoy a good read.

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Hi Yvonne - and welcome to Write Out Loud - nice to see you on here. It really is a good forum for posting new material and the feedback you get can help shape your poems for future publishing / performing.
Glad you liked 'the beast beneath the beck' - not sure about roses but I think you just click on the bud that appears beneath the post,
Looking forward to reading some more of your stuff
Ian

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