Hi Random Bubbly. Have you ever thought of putting your work into stanzas (verse type bits) ? I find reading it like in your sample difficult. Split into easy-to-read chunks would make it easier to read. For me. I see you've just arrived. pleased to make you're acquaintance
Don ?
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Big Sal
Thu 19th Jul 2018 02:30
Can't wait to see what else you have in store. Raw emotion waiting to be untangled in lines of poetic parchment.?
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