I love this line from your sample
I decided that I was not Jewish enough to care.
I also like how you moved from style at the second-hand store to style in Jewish clothing. Well done!
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Cynthia Buell Thomas
Mon 31st Dec 2018 21:58
Hannah, I'll try to catch up with more of your work this 2019. You have 'style' in writing too, which is impossible without sincerity. And ideas worth sharing.
Anya's advice is excellent.
That is an interesting photo on this bio page, obviously not a selfie. Full of 'message' it is, open to individual interpretation. Presuming it is you, of course, bold and bare breasted. Correct me if I'm wrong. And I do mean 'bold' in a most complimentary way.
4:00 A.M. can be a magical hour for new ideas to surface. And be put into action. Poets must have a source of personal 'magic', call it whatever you will.
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