Shuchi,
A tragic tale of unrequited love.
An experience like that destroys your faith and trust in human nature.....but time is a great healer.
Well done.
Regards,
Dave
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poemagraphic: Thanks alot ?
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so nice poem...Beautiful relation
Sunday, January 6, 2019
7:59 AM
Feet dance
when we have a chance
in love to mingle
and feel as loving people
nothing matters
as surroundings offer
and echo over love
to be sincerely believed
everything remains quiet
when we let
no moments to pass
in our love stance
my soul feels your touch
to reach
an inner depth
and make the heavy breath
That is I know
and go
by simple assumption
the love is beautiful relation
Hasmukh Mehta
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Big Sal
Sun 30th Dec 2018 13:14
Welcome to Write Out Loud.?
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Jon Stainsby
Fri 25th Jan 2019 21:38
Thank you, Shuchi for your comment in my profile. It is much appreciated. ?
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