I love your poetry, but may I suggest varying the rhyming word ending?
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very nice ideas, I like the poem very much, its too bad the world is going to shit, all we can hope in is Gods love for humans. thanks
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John F Keane
Wed 3rd Mar 2010 21:48
There will never be peace in this world, friend. War burns too deeply in our blood.
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