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A Final Note

by Jeff Bresee

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First note chimes,

long silence gone.

Like breath again

or light at dawn.

 

Pure joy to hear,

healed by each note.

Lost in the melody,

finding hope.

 

With new life comes

new eyes too see,

and ears to hear

but eventually…

 

the song winds down,

fire fades to smoke.

For each song has

a final note.

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