http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6OQqxyojzEU

I'd like to know what you guys think. :)

Ho! Ho! Ho!

Well... it's small wonder that cheery ole Uncle 'Friendly' always looks so happy after cumming down the chimney.


(You Tube)Great poem BTW


Gus xx

thank you Gus :)

That's an amazing piece of poetry.

I have a few poems where I touch on relationships in society and the bs mentality of not being friends with your girlfriend so I really related to this.

I think a girlfriend should be a bro or sis, or a relationship should be just a genderless extension of ourselves combined in one love... you hit that note perfectly.

Please visit Manchester's poetry scene at some point, you're a very dynamic poet.

Thank you Indigo :)