Why do we write?
Hey people, very interesting these discussions and reviews, I'm sorry I had to leave like that, I've been poorly and my body was just kicking off but i'm back in the saddle! (I wonder if that was a good expression?) Well, a lot of discourse has been going on amongst some writer friends of mine and i just wanted to extend that to the general house-why do we write? Is it a compulsion? a duty? for enjoyment? what? why do we write what we write? why do we write at all? what do we see ourselves as? social commetators? consciences? rebels?
I know this isn't as profound a discourse as many would like but it was fun talking about it and maybe you'd like to join in.
Anyways, here's one of my takes on it. Cheers.
NO AMBUIGUITY
I am the pretty face
The wide smile
The innocent look
I tell the lies you hide
Your sensual thoughts uncovered
I’m shocking, revealing
Indiscreet!
I tell the thoughts you smother
In between embarrassed lips
‘Go on say it!’ no!
The hidden demons that haunt you
Delight you, torment you, and scandalize you
I expose
I am the truth-teller
Secret revealer
Your secret fears broadcast
Your hidden hideous? Thoughts exposed
A gun, a wand, a perpendicular stick of sugar
It is what turns your inner being into molten lava
Laugh embarrassed and die inside
A mole, a road or a hole with soul
It is what makes you blink rapid quick
Curl up inside and cry
Call, think or do it
It’s exposed! To me, dirty liar!
I know this isn't as profound a discourse as many would like but it was fun talking about it and maybe you'd like to join in.
Anyways, here's one of my takes on it. Cheers.
NO AMBUIGUITY
I am the pretty face
The wide smile
The innocent look
I tell the lies you hide
Your sensual thoughts uncovered
I’m shocking, revealing
Indiscreet!
I tell the thoughts you smother
In between embarrassed lips
‘Go on say it!’ no!
The hidden demons that haunt you
Delight you, torment you, and scandalize you
I expose
I am the truth-teller
Secret revealer
Your secret fears broadcast
Your hidden hideous? Thoughts exposed
A gun, a wand, a perpendicular stick of sugar
It is what turns your inner being into molten lava
Laugh embarrassed and die inside
A mole, a road or a hole with soul
It is what makes you blink rapid quick
Curl up inside and cry
Call, think or do it
It’s exposed! To me, dirty liar!
Sat, 15 Sep 2007 03:07 pm
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Hi Abi,
I really like the poem and I think this is a very interesting discourse indeed. And I for one would like to know what others think.
I think writing is a compulsion that can become a craft and vice versa it can be a craft that becomes a compulsion.
I think great writing often comes from a need to understand the world and the things that happen in it, whether this comes from a place of pain, purpose all political ambition.
I really like the poem and I think this is a very interesting discourse indeed. And I for one would like to know what others think.
I think writing is a compulsion that can become a craft and vice versa it can be a craft that becomes a compulsion.
I think great writing often comes from a need to understand the world and the things that happen in it, whether this comes from a place of pain, purpose all political ambition.
Sat, 15 Sep 2007 03:26 pm
<Deleted User>
What a great poem Sophie - that's great - I love your sense of irony.
xxx
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Sat, 15 Sep 2007 03:55 pm
For me the below sums it up.
Writing
Writing ignites a spark in me
Lighting flames of creativity
Heat warms me to my sole
Gives freedom and control
Words form and pour out of me
As does rain from atop a tree
A steady flow forms into a line
Word line begin to inter-twine
Each line or twine begins to form
I tease them together to reform
Into poems with a turn of phrase
My words flow to the next phase
Personally sourced from inner being
Held within verses; it’s me your seeing
Waves of raw feeling lay open; bare
I hope can enable you; help more share
Don’t hide below sailing the ‘Creative Sea’
It is wrong to hide; celebrate your disability
Get on the main deck; no more disguises
Be surprised; re-ignite; there are many prizes
To complete nautical miles; loose rope; set sale
Each journey start somewhere with its own tale
No matter which direction you point your compass
You have the right of choice; make it come to pass
Whatever lights those sparks in you
Become as one with your sole; not two
Seek counsel but you’re state attorney
Live life is for living; this is your journey
Cheers
Bard from Urmston
Writing
Writing ignites a spark in me
Lighting flames of creativity
Heat warms me to my sole
Gives freedom and control
Words form and pour out of me
As does rain from atop a tree
A steady flow forms into a line
Word line begin to inter-twine
Each line or twine begins to form
I tease them together to reform
Into poems with a turn of phrase
My words flow to the next phase
Personally sourced from inner being
Held within verses; it’s me your seeing
Waves of raw feeling lay open; bare
I hope can enable you; help more share
Don’t hide below sailing the ‘Creative Sea’
It is wrong to hide; celebrate your disability
Get on the main deck; no more disguises
Be surprised; re-ignite; there are many prizes
To complete nautical miles; loose rope; set sale
Each journey start somewhere with its own tale
No matter which direction you point your compass
You have the right of choice; make it come to pass
Whatever lights those sparks in you
Become as one with your sole; not two
Seek counsel but you’re state attorney
Live life is for living; this is your journey
Cheers
Bard from Urmston
Sat, 15 Sep 2007 06:03 pm
Interesting views here, i'm glad at the response and from what i have read, a writer isn't writing primarily to make money (though we all want that) but to ease the burden within, i really like the view of it being a compulsion at one point or the other, so mostly, a writer doesn't write just because they want to say something but because something on the inside needs to be said, its like being pregnant, whether a woman likes it or not, once that baby's inside, it must come out one way or the other. i look forward to hearing more views. a splendid week to everyone
Sun, 16 Sep 2007 11:48 pm