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Rebekah Mai Corrigan

Updated: Sat, 18 Feb 2017 04:19 am

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Biography

Sensitive and creative - That's how I would describe myself. I'm a strong character with Native American and Irish roots.. I have strong psychic gifts and believe in any form of creativity for spiritual growth.. I studied Drama, Art, Ballet and Literature.. I am now reading and writing my own poetry. I am inspired by musicians and Poets... Sylvia Plath. Love & Light - Rebekah ❤

Samples

- Charmer- I can't remember but it happened fast, I fell under your spell.. like a wishing well. I still yearn for your kiss your touch I miss.. All the things we've been through.. Good and bad, Tender kisses Whispered promises.. With a featherlight touch of your hand on my arm.. soothing me. A sweet soft kiss.. Now just a memory. Then we had a silly row.. You packed your bags left a note. Gone. I cried for days. Pride is a funny thing... We never spoke after that.. And now you're making the same promises to some new girl in town. I could shout.. But what's the point Why taunt. Why pout. The curve of your smile and your eyes still have that hypnotic effect on me... Bet you still weave that crazy magic with her... Hope it lasts...

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Rebekah Mai Corrigan

Sat 18th Feb 2017 06:14

Thank you, glad you like my poem and thanks for your comments x

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Ezra

Sat 18th Feb 2017 04:20

Nice poem. If I can give constructive criticism try revising certain parts that are common such as your line " I fell under your spell." For example instead you could say "enchanting spells put me in a trance."

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