Spoken_Thoughts
Updated: Wed, 22 Oct 2014 09:40 pm
Biography
Writing hasn't always been a passion of mine. I used tog et picked/bullied on so I use writing to vent. Over the years it has become a passion of mine. Please comment because I would to improve and hear your thoughts:) Thanks:)
Samples
Listen. Listen. Listen. Do you hear that? That sound? Its the sound of your beating heart. And theres a reason why it continues to beat. So, don't hurt yourself or end it because, someone has hurt you emotionally or physically. I say this because, I had also thought about ending my own life because, of others had hurt me. So, listen. Listen. Listen. Listen to me when I say this. When I say that you are important; that you are meant to live and soar with the wings you were given. (pause) Listen to me. Don't listen to them. LISTEN
All poems are copyright of the originating author. Permission must be obtained before using or performing others' poems.
Blog entries by Spoken_Thoughts
"I Love You." (28/12/2014)
Fuck You (23/12/2014)
A Fool (21/12/2014)
The Monster (28/11/2014)
Alone (16/11/2014)
Now I know (24/10/2014)
Captured within my Darkness (24/10/2014)
Three weeks with you. (24/10/2014)
Dear J. (24/10/2014)
Barbie is fake, Beauty is real (24/10/2014)
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<Deleted User> (13139)
Sun 9th Nov 2014 11:23
gday love. my names rhys, just made a profile myself i really liked this, ive got a friend that went through some rough times, id like to know if youre ok with me sending this to her?
Hello Crystal ,
Yes the counter records the number of times someone has looked at your page.
Regards,
Graham
Hello again Crystal. Just a short message to let you know about the way the blog pages work.
Only the most recent entry will be shown on the blog page, all previous ones will be archived. So if you put several on in one go, only the last one will remain visible without sorting through the older ones.
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I hope this helps!
very best regards, and welcome once again.
Graham
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Tommy Carroll
Sat 29th Nov 2014 01:00
Hi. In response to your invitation to help re your work, I would avoid stock phrases such as "beating heart" and "soar with the wings etc". Avoid at all costs (joke) and you will find a truer voice. Tommy