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I would be nothing without you

I was nothing

Then you held my hand

Guided me through lifes maze

And gave me an identity

 

Watching you closely

Trusting you implicitly

Imitating you faithfully

Was all that was necessary to mould me

I would have been nothing

If there was no you to teach me

🌷(5)

◄ Really _ the dead woman was her mother!

Judge not too harsly ►

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Do.RoThy

Mon 23rd Mar 2020 02:20

How romantically beautiful....lovely!!!

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sun 22nd Mar 2020 22:11

Beautiful. ?

Philipos

Sun 22nd Mar 2020 21:24

A very profound piece this Abdul and sounds like a Mother's day special. Will get around to looking at some of your other stuff eventually. Blessings. P. ?

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