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Right side up

We know each other

                upside down

 

Every day we exchange    

                    sun for moon

                    day for night

One awake

One asleep

                   keeping a careful eye

            on our shared possessions

 

Geography suggests

                a point of view

                a direction

                to our connection

You are down under

 

But our minds suggest

                a more complex interaction

                an up and down situation

We travel intermittently

                to both poles

 

The search for the right side up

                        a waste of time

 

The quickest way to each other

Is the straight line

                on paper

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◄ Nothing out of me

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Don Matthews

Sun 29th Mar 2020 10:10

I'm pleased to see you've removed the comment I have just been referring to

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Don Matthews

Sun 29th Mar 2020 10:08

I don't regard your comments funny Brian. Nor appropriate.

And please don't use 'ffs' when talking to me. I don't respond well to gutter language.

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Don Matthews

Sun 29th Mar 2020 09:57

Inappropriate call Brian

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Jeannot

Sun 29th Mar 2020 00:24

Wrong call Bryan; happily married with three children!

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Don Matthews

Sat 28th Mar 2020 23:37

Someone who's at the other
Side of planet earth
Who's just got outa bed (yawn)
Does he live in Perth?


I'm stumped......

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Jeannot

Sat 28th Mar 2020 23:24

Take a wild guess! ?

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Don Matthews

Sat 28th Mar 2020 23:15

I like this.....who's she talking about?

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